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I didn't have a name for this poem...help...
when i see you in the halls
someone is next to you
why would she be next to you?
but when i look closer
you hold hands with her
hug her
hold her close
i'm no longer that person any more
she is...
someone is next to you
why would she be next to you?
but when i look closer
you hold hands with her
hug her
hold her close
i'm no longer that person any more
she is...
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Permalink Reply by Jane on -
i liked this guy and we were best friends...
i liked him so much...
but he replaced me...his best friend
for her...we no linger talk anymore...
i miss him...
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Permalink Reply by ButterFly Love on -
It reads like a story. I think a good title is "my twin"
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Permalink Reply by Antonio on -
How about '' Different one Under your Wing '' if too long '' Replaced Soul '' or something along those lines
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Permalink Reply by poison passion on -
how about y her
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Permalink Reply by Britt Nicole on -
thats very good. i wish i could help you but some of the other replies are pretty good.... i think replaced soul would work the best though. good luck!
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Permalink Reply by Darkest Passion of a Blackbird on -
alright how about 'left behind.'.. or maybe 'misery of your memory'
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Permalink Reply by Jane on
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wow these are all good
but i think you guys
can come up with some more...
if you do have more...
then...write it here and tell me...
if its good enough then
i'll use it...
just keep the titles coming...
i accept all ideas/name titles
<3 me
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Permalink Reply by Arana FM--Kaulitz on -
"Where im suposed to be" or "somethings missing"...idk..:D
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Permalink Reply by Lilith of the Howling Wolves on -
... awesome poem... as for titles... sometimes a poem with no title has more impact than a poem with one... i have three poems that are simply named...untitled 1...untitled 2...and untitled 3... and they are some of my best...
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