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Writing a story together
Anyone will be allowed to write any amount of it as you like, just do not dominate the story.
To continue the story: Reply to the last person to write a bit.
To comment on the story/suggest something that could happen but not written out: Do not reply to any specific person.
(Btw if it turns out good I will try and get it published, but we will all get credit, don't worry)
It can be about... an ordinary school where everyone is supernatural, but everyone keeps it a secret (apart from occasional telling it to your best friend) so no one knows that everyone is :P So perhaps we could have it going to different people's point of view at times. (At which case please state that it has changed POV)
To continue the story: Reply to the last person to write a bit.
To comment on the story/suggest something that could happen but not written out: Do not reply to any specific person.
(Btw if it turns out good I will try and get it published, but we will all get credit, don't worry)
It can be about... an ordinary school where everyone is supernatural, but everyone keeps it a secret (apart from occasional telling it to your best friend) so no one knows that everyone is :P So perhaps we could have it going to different people's point of view at times. (At which case please state that it has changed POV)
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Permalink Reply by Lillith Rose Amaranthus ♥ on -
wow, i think everyone is having majour writers block
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Permalink Reply by Aisling on -
Yh, lol, sorry... it's also the fact that I'll need to backtrack a few pages to get ideas and I just haven't had time really.
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Permalink Reply by Ina Divine on -
* so I had mononucleosis and was really sick so i couldn't write and if i screw this part sorry , it's because of the mono , it fried my brain :) *
Sill Sammy
When we got to the house we saw armchair on the porch and the smashed window .
We came rushing through the door , first me than Simon and Kerry behind me.
Dave and Kyle were holding Mat who was red faced angry and was trying to brake their grip .
" Get the fuck out of the house Reena. " Kyle was looking at the broken window. " You making us go crazy doesn't help you at all."
Everyone was silent for a minute than Mat started to scream again at the window : " I don't understand the fuck what your saying. "
" What is she saying ? " I heard my brother behind me than he gone to Mat , Kerry didn't left his side.
"She's rambling something about life forms and portals ." Kyle said when Mat didn't .
" What did she said , her actual words? "
" Okay , you wanted this" Mat was so angry " You fucking stupid idiots , listen to me, The dead form of a fucking living guide will take the undead through the Gratulis portals. "
Simon was silent but than begun " Reena , you don't even know if that story is true and beside that we don't know how can we help you. "
POV Mat
" Oh please , tell my stupid brother ( she means coven brother ) that I am not planing to stay here for the rest of my fucking life. I'm going to try all that I can and if it means that you have to get "the book" you're gonna get it. Lalalalalalala... "
" Oh please just stop the la-la thing ." Kyle was pleading .
" And beside , Mat , what are you planing to do when they let you go ? You can't hurt me in your human form. " Reena was making me.
Thats right , how didn't I think of that my self. " Simon she wants us to get the book . And wait just a moment."
I left my body and ran to Reena to see if I could hit her in my ghost form .
I hit her in the face . It works .
She smiled , what the fuck, ?
You finally get it!!!
POV Kyle
Why am I all of a sudden seeing ghosts ?
We put Mats body on the couch and than I started to explain everyone what was going on.
" Turns out that I can see ghosts now. Mat is okay , he just wanted to try to hit Reena in his ghost form. "
"And ? " others asked .
" Turns out he can."
* So I have this idea , that Simon has to go back to Antony's coven , act like he's back for good , so he could get the book. Kyle can see ghosts cause The Book says that there are two guides who have to lead the undead back to life and Kyle is the one as well as Mat. ( Kyle has to do something with fire dunno. ) ... What do you think??? And if you want I could write more , I have so many ideas .....*
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Permalink Reply by annixandra lightwing on -
*looks good to me i dont think any body else can write i think i caused major writers block for the rest of u guys see thats why i dont write im sorry you had mono at least your better now right?*
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Permalink Reply by Ina Divine on
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*i'm kind off better, but i liked what you wrote ... i'll write more *
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Permalink Reply by Ina Divine on
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POV Reena
" You finally get it. You are supposed to help me and you need to be in this form. You see it now , don't you , the portals. " I took his head and shoved him to the left where there were two portals and than to the right where there were tree.
" You see? " I asked when he didn't answer . He looked first left than right again.
" Yeah , I see them . "
" I don't see a thing . " Kyle said looking at us. " But why do I see you two guys ? "
I had no answer to that. So I just turned around to look at Simon and said.
" That's what Simon is going to tell us when he gets the book . "
than I continued " Kyle tell them that . "
In the mean while ,as Kyle was explaining the situation to others I talked to Mat who was still looking dazed by the Gratulis portals.
" I'm kind of , in a weird way , sorry for the fucking la la thing , but I needed you to turn to your g. form."
" And you couldn't just as like a normal person ?" Mat turned to me.
" You try being alive but invisible, and tell me if you would do it the normal way. Anyway you wouldn't have listen to me. "
" Okay I need a brake . I'm leaving ."
" You have an half an hour . "
" Or I can just smash your head."
" Your silly , I don't feel a thing. " I smiled and he was gone.
POV Simon
"And she said you need to get the book . If you ask me , I don't see the portals but I believe in Mat , he wouldn't lie , why would he ? ! " Kyle said like he was defending him.
I now looked at Kerry , she was at my side the whole time , holding my hand , kissing it every now and than. Than I looked at Sammy and she was looking at me like she knew what I was planing .
" You aren't! " Sammy screamed.
"What?" Kerry was shaking .
" You'll get killed , Antony will kill you. " Sammy continued .
"Not if he thinks I'm back for good. '' I thought of a plan and there was nothing that could stop me. Not even Kerry.
* So is anyone able to continue the story ? pretty please. *
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Permalink Reply by Princess of Shadows on -
Omg this story is amazing. I have a couple of ideas that i could add but heres the genral storyline.
Sammy tries to stop Simon from going cos she thinks hes going to die so she tries to take his place. Keisha ends up meeting the werewolf again and gets bitten. Kerry is still evil but a nicer evil and ends up rescuing Keisha (sorry if i spelt it wrong).and id add more but it would take too long sorry. But other than that i am no good at stories poems are more my thing and even those arent that good. x
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Permalink Reply by Ina Divine on
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*what werewolf ? and do others see we forgot about our (at first) main character Dave ?! Okay , I'll write more just wait till i get it on m.word than I'll copy paste . :) *
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Permalink Reply by annixandra lightwing on
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* at one point just before my post were i wrote some there was a werewolf that was going to attack but Kerry stopped it i like the ideas you put out princess of shadows they have been kind of running through my mind as possible things to put up along with possibly Kerry trying to stop Simon or helping Sammy try to stop him possibly having the werewolf be a bad guy possibly be a good guy that thinks there the bad guys and wants to stop them could do a lot of things with whats going on could have it be family of Dave's since hes part werewolf it could be like a cousin with a grudge agents him that teams up with the bad guys could do lots with that question is does any body have an idea of how Simon is going to get back in or if we chose it could be Sammy that goes in because she wants to save her brother she could pretend to go bad who as ideas of how there going to get the book if Sammy goes in how will she know what the book looks like and were it is what does the book look like if Simon goes in he would know all of that but still have the question of how hes going to get back in he could say he went with them to get information of how much they know all of that give a few secrets away about there group to get there trust and get the book idk just ideas and questions but it defiantly looks good :) *
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Permalink Reply by Ina Divine on
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POV change Sammy
I wasn't going to lose my brother , not again. Antony won in the past but I wont let him win this time.
I will go but I have to make a plan.
'' So when are you leaving?" I looked at Simon and he kind of looked like he was relieved but somehow disappointed.
Don't be silly my dear brother , I'm not going to let you go, I thought.
" Youre going to let him leave?" Kerry said , shock all acrose her face.
"Well , I know my brother, if he decides to go he'll go and beside he can take care of himself , we just have to make a good plan."
Everyone looked at me like I was the bad guy , the enemy. I know that look, I remember it from the beginning. It hurt.
" We don't have another choice ."
* I like your ideas !!!!!!!!!!!*
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Permalink Reply by Mel on -
** Luv all the ideas... sorry haven't been writing but my computer crashed and it stopped working and been busy with schoolwork... i'll try and add something soon.**
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Permalink Reply by Mel on
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Banana Babe wrote this but i accidentally deleted it:
I luvvv ur ideas!! as for the reason that kyle can see ghosts what do you think that maybe its coz remember that time where kyle and matt combined their powers?? maybe a bit of matts powers rubbed off on him but he can only see ghosts and nothin happens to matt or we'll just complicate the story. This could also make it dangerous and a rlly big climax at the very end of the book where maybe to defeat the ultimate bad guy they'd have to combine all the powers but no one knows wt cud happen coz it cud destroy them.
also... wt do u guys think about simon goin and anthony finding out and hes about to kill him but keisha would have had a premonition about him dying and goes and saves him.
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