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Permalink Reply by Blood Angel on March 17, 2009 at 4:03am

*you guys trying to kill her!? :P*

I had to gain control again. I fell on my back and scooted away. At least tried to. Sammy came after me again. Now she'd pissed me off. I raised both my hands and heard her laugh again.
"You think you can protect yourself from me, you pitiful human," I maneuvered the air around her.
"Pity this, bitch!" Once again she found herself in the air. "You forget. I'm not some pitiful human!" Where were Dave and Kerry? I felt my blood running. How long before it ran too much?

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Permalink Reply by Aisling on March 18, 2009 at 8:54am

I fainted,

Chapter 3:

I heard the story from Dave and Kerry. Kerry had arrived in time to save me. They had now learnt their lesson and locked Sammy in a cave. Dave kept on apologising to me. He'd ran off because he smelt my blood and would have probably killed me if he'd stayed. He says that I was bleeding so much, just him drinking a little bit of my blood would have killed me. I said 'Nice...'

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Permalink Reply by Blood Angel on March 18, 2009 at 4:45pm

*Psst, Aisling. This should be Chapter 4*

I looked at the two of them.
"Will that cave hold Sammy?" Before either one could answer, my eyes unfocused.

'Dad was talking to the police. Kyle was pacing back and forth.
"Damnit, Keisha. Where the hell are you? I don't want to have to move again," The police left and Dad joined Kyle.
"She'll be alright, Kyle," He said. "She can hold her own,"'

"Oh, shit!" Kerry gave me a stern look. "Sorry. Dad's called the police," I looked down at all the scratches and the blood on my clothes. "How am I supposed to explain this!?"

*Kyle is Keisha's twin, fyi*

Permalink Reply by Aisling on March 18, 2009 at 5:34pm

*Oops! So it should be! My bad! Also my bad - I didn't spell check it 'cos my friends came to pick me up for school... supposed to be 'cage' not 'cave' sorry*

I watched Dave's eyes widen in horror, next thing I know he was right beside me.

"You can't go back now!" He looked me up and down and all over, it made me blush. "There's no way to explain it!"

"I have to go back! The police are involved." I sat up more to look deeply into his eyes. He looked so handsome... I just wanted to kiss him... I licked my lips.

POV Change (Dave):

I got up and went over to Kerry. Oh, yeah... at super-human speed. To the others I was probably just a blur... that or it looked as if I teleported.

"What do you reckon we should do?" I had my hands on her shoulders. She seemed to search my eyes for something.

POV Change (Kerry):

I searched his eyes for love. I knew that he loved me. I knew that he didn't love her. But I'm so confused as to what's going on. I felt myself zone out.

POV Change (Dave):

Kerry fainted in my arms. I caught her with ease and slowly laid her down on the ground with her head in my lap.

"Kerry? Kerry! Are you okay? Kerry!" Then I realised what was going on. I sighed with relief. "Oh. It's okay. She's just having an angel moment."

"An... angel moment?" Keisha asked behind me.

"Yeah." I craned my head round to try and see her. It didn't work very well. "It means that she's being spoken to by another angel, an archangel or perhaps even God. It's also always very important."

POV Change (Kerry):

I woke up and Dave was looking at me. He smiled.

"Who was it this time?" He asked. I sat up and turned to face him, neatly and gracefully tucking my legs under myself in the process. I tucked a lock of hair behind my ear.

"Archangel Michael." I was panting slightly. When I have an angel moment my body goes into a sort of hibernation and stops breathing as much as it should, so when I return I'm always panting.

"What'd he say?" Dave asked.

I tried to recall what he said. I always forget for up to 5 minutes after it happens. So it'd be useless if they wanted to help me or get my help urgently. Now I remember... he explained to me the me/Dave/Keisha situation... he loved me and always has done... he wasn't thirsty the other morning (like I knew)... the Gods just made him feel like it so that he would suck Keisha's blood... everything with us four... (yes, four... that's Sammy who's including unfortunatly) is immensely important. We need to stay together. The fate of the world rests in our hands. And he said... he said that someone else was to join us to, but we had to be careful... there may be a false person coming along...

"He said that Keisha couldn't go home. Not yet. But she should probably call and tell them not to worry." I hated lying... in fact... I'd never even done it before, it hurt, just like it normally hurts when anyone else lies, but I didn't show it. Arachangel Michael told me that I couldn't tell anyone.

"That's it?" Dave looked sceptical.

I nodded, not trusting myself to lie again. I also 'Mmmhmm'ed. It didn't hurt, as it wasn't technically a lie.

*Oops... carried away again... SOZ! But this time I have an excuse... I'm keeping my mind off of my cat! =[ (Hasn't been seen in 41 hours and she doesn't normally do this)*

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Permalink Reply by Blood Angel on March 19, 2009 at 12:49am

POV Change (Keisha)

"If I'm suppose to call home, how excatly am I going to do that?" Dad would have the biggest cow in the history of the Earth and Kyle would go out trying to find me with the twin connection we have. "Oh, man," I moaned.
"What?" Dave asked, concerned.
"I have a twin. He would have known about..." I couldn't finish. "Oh man,"

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Permalink Reply by Aisling on March 19, 2009 at 8:44am

Dave looked puzzled. "Twins don't know everything about each other you know. They can't sense these things, although if they're identical then they sometimes do... but Kyle? Hardly going to be your identical twin, is he?"

"But... we always know what each other's doing... I thought all twins were like that?" I was puzzled.

"Er... no..." Dave and Kerry answered.

Wow. Turns out there's even more supernaturalness in my life...

*very short I know, soz. But I'm not really in the mood to write*

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Permalink Reply by Aisling on March 21, 2009 at 12:55pm

*Wow I hate myself for making such a weird bit that seems impossible to reply to... but it's been 2 days now so... I'll reply as it was my fault...*

POV Change (Kerry):

"Someone's coming." Dave was suddenly edgey and aware of things.

"I know." I answered. He shot me a curious glance. "I have it under control. Archangel Michael said someone was going to come. But he or she would be good, not bad." I explained. He relaxed a little, but only a little.

We waited anxiously for the person to approach. He came through the trees and...

"Kyle!" Keisha yelled with surprise.

I was surprised too. Kyle was the person who was supposed to help us? I didn't think so. I had obviously got the wrong impression... I think. Archangel Michael said that there might be a fake person coming... Keisha better not get used to him being here... just in case.

POV Change (Keisha):

I was so glad to see him! I got up and ran to him, hugging him hard. Then I got a vision. Just a short one. I staggered away from him, keeping my eyes on him. This wasn't Kyle. Kyle was still at the police station. This was a changeling.

Chapter 5:

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Permalink Reply by Ina Divine on March 21, 2009 at 1:39pm

* it's my first time so if it is bad and short, sry*

Everyone was staring at me. Dave started to walk towards me.
"Dave stop!" Kerry shouted
I stud there silently for a secund or so. How did this come to be?! Am I dreaming, is this a nightmare?! Everything was a mess , I didn't know what to do.
This person thet look't like Kyle seem'd to me puzzled, but didn't talk until I spoke first.
" Who are you?"

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Permalink Reply by Ina Divine on March 22, 2009 at 1:05pm

"Who are you?'' The words came out with anger.
Was I angry, is that what I've felt? I was allways used to be in control and all of suden I've met this cute guy and my life turned upside down. Not that my life was normal and perfect anyway , but I allways had managed to live it throw.
Now my family and my boyfriend wore in danger. Is he my boyfri...? Dear God why am I thinking of that in this moment.
"Keisha are you alright? It's me Kyle"
Am I going crazy? I saw Kyle at the station.

* sry but I can't stand this , I had to write something more*

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Permalink Reply by Aisling on March 22, 2009 at 8:34pm

*It's fine, I got a tad confused when I got 2 e-mails, but you've written less in two things than I tend to in one =]*

POV Change (Dave):

I looked between the two of them. What was going on? I was assuming that this was Kyle... but Keisha didn't seem to think so... this is so confusing...

I looked to Kerry for help. She shrugged at me, looking just as confused as I was. I looked to Sammy, who was pretending to not pay attention. Then I looked back to the Twins... if they WERE Twins... I heard Kerry muttering a small prayer of some sort to Michael. Crap! I mean Archangel Michael. (Kerry says it's rude to just call him Michael, even in your thoughts)

Suddenly her prayer stopped. In the middle of a sentence. I wasn't trying to find out what she was saying, but you can tell when a sentence ends by the pauses and syllables in words and all sorts of shit that I can't explain properly. I turned round to look at her in confusion to find that she was having An Angel Moment.

I ran to her, kissed her forhead and wished her luck then returned to my original place, all in such speed that no one else apart from Sammy realised I'd moved.

POV Change (Kerry):

My prayer had been answered. I'd asked Archangel Michael to explain to me what was going on. Unfortunatly, I'd already been given as much information as he could actually tell me, so it was just a clue type thing.

There was a board in the middle of nowhere. I was confused... but then a picture of a pixie-elf-type-thing showed up on it. I cocked my head to one side, trying to make sense of it. An equals sign came up on it. My eyes widened in surprise. My head hurt. Then a Gemini sign came up... the sign of the Twins... then I realised. Kyle was actually a... a... a what? Pixie... elf... fairy...?

I returned to Earth, feeling even more confused than before.

"Welcome back." Dave said without even looking at me.

I smiled half-heartedly, knowing that he could probably sense that I was doing it.

"You're not Kyle..." Keisha was crying now, probably more in confusion and pain that this... thing was impersonating her twin.

"Keisha...? What's wrong? It's me... there's no way that I could be anyone else..." He looked pained. And I could tell instantly that that was what hurt Keisha the most.

She shook her head. "You're... not!" She sobbed loudly.

"Do you have any proof...?" He smiled, as if joking with her. Then he opened his mouth to say something serious when it hit me.

"Yes!" I yell out, shocking everyone, even Sammy in the cage behind me.

"What?" Kyle looked anxious now that he was close to being found out.

"Archangel Michael showed me! You're a changeling!" It made sense to me now. It wasn't a pixie, or an elf, or even a fairy. It was a changeling!

He turned into his true, changeling form and hissed. My smile immediatly fled from my face.

*Sorry, it's long... but it proves my point above! :P*

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Permalink Reply by Ina Divine on March 22, 2009 at 9:20pm

* point well taken *

Keisha jumped away from the creature.

POV Change (Keisha)

What the hell ?! At least I'm not crazy. My heart started to pound with huge speed. Blood was rushing through my veins. I rised my arm to take him down but my powers were usless against him. I couldn't take him down on my own.
" Kerry" This was the firs time I've asked her for hellp.I felt like she didn't like me very much.
She murmured something that I didn't understand and the creature left with out another hiss.
I forgot abouth the man that shot me. I glanced aroun to see if he ran away. He stood in place silently.
In my vision he wanted to shut the changeling and in some bizare way I think that he wanted to hellp. But why did he shut me?
" Why?" those were the only words I could spoke.

POV Change (Dave)

I had no idea what was Keisha trying to get with that question. The only thing I knew is tha I had a strong urge to stand beside her. In one moment I was by her side taking her in my embrace.
She didn't push me away. I wiped away the tears from her cheeks.

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Permalink Reply by Aisling on March 22, 2009 at 9:55pm

*Btw... can you please spell-check after? Not to seem rude or anything...*

"Shh... it's okay now..." I told her, though I don't know why. I could feel her pain through our Imprint and it hurt. Bad. Perhaps that was why... if she stopped hurting so could I...

Her heart suddenly started racing, and she grew happier, I felt it, but that made me unhappy... I didn't want to make her happy because I was around her... but then she got unhappy because I was and she could feel it... ARGH! This damn Imprint was so GodDamn annoying! Oh, shit! Kerry would kill me if she found out about my blasphemy! ARGH! Even worse...!

*Oh... and btw I had started replying WAY before Lost Soul had... that's why they don't link properly... =[ (And it shouldn't be from Kyle's POV 'cos it's not Kyle! ARGH! Sorry... just unleashing the anger that I feel atm via the computer instead of real life...)*

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