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Writing a story together
Anyone will be allowed to write any amount of it as you like, just do not dominate the story.
To continue the story: Reply to the last person to write a bit.
To comment on the story/suggest something that could happen but not written out: Do not reply to any specific person.
(Btw if it turns out good I will try and get it published, but we will all get credit, don't worry)
It can be about... an ordinary school where everyone is supernatural, but everyone keeps it a secret (apart from occasional telling it to your best friend) so no one knows that everyone is :P So perhaps we could have it going to different people's point of view at times. (At which case please state that it has changed POV)
To continue the story: Reply to the last person to write a bit.
To comment on the story/suggest something that could happen but not written out: Do not reply to any specific person.
(Btw if it turns out good I will try and get it published, but we will all get credit, don't worry)
It can be about... an ordinary school where everyone is supernatural, but everyone keeps it a secret (apart from occasional telling it to your best friend) so no one knows that everyone is :P So perhaps we could have it going to different people's point of view at times. (At which case please state that it has changed POV)
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Permalink Reply by Ina Divine on -
*sorry*
POV Change (Keisha)
I was comfused. In one moment I felt happy and than the opposit. I didn't think on the man anymore. Dave was in my thoughts. I was in danger from the first time that I've saw him but I didn't feel that way. But I was scared, scared for him. I whould risk my life to make him safe. He was my life now.
What was this that I was feeling? Is it love or something else?
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Permalink Reply by Blood Angel on -
*I'm still around. I just can't think of a damn thing to right. Ok let me get this straight. The changeling was trying to impersonate Kyle and some guy that had shot Keisha is there. I think I need a map cause I'm a bit lost. lol. Oh and are you guys gonna need Kyle's powers. They're different from Keisha's*
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Permalink Reply by Aisling on -
*Yeah, if you thought of some lolz and it's fine =] I had a hard time at one point and yeah... that's what happened, it got confusing when Lost Soul wrote 'cos I was writing at the same time (And it can't be Kyle's POV! - No, I'm not gunna let it go)*
POV Change (Kerry):
Keisha was confused, I could tell. And not only about the situation which was confusing enough... but about her love situation with Dave. I sighed inwardly. This is going to be hard to work out later. Then I fell. I was having An Angel Moment.
There was a board again. But I hadn't asked for a clue...? What was going on? I stopped in my tracks. Froze. Everything, everywhere, even my thoughts.
There were two words on the board.
BEWARE GUNMAN.
Chapter 6:
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Permalink Reply by Ina Divine on
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*hey I thought that the gunman was a good guy*
I opened my eyes in disbelief and focused on the gunman. What was his story? Was he the good guy or the bad guy? I could tell that he wasn't planing a attack and didn't have any intentions that might do us any harm. But the words said beware. I'm not letting him out off my sight.
POV Change( Sammy)
What in the name of God was going on? Sure I've seen it all but this was new. I still wanted to cut there heads off but this was ineresting , that I must say.
I could do it after this ends but I must get out of this cage.
" Seems like you guys might need my hellp" I spoke with an inoccent smile.
* I have every intentions of making this book interasting so let Kerry bealive that Sammy means no harm.*
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Permalink Reply by Aisling on
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*Lolz. Okay. And the gunman seems like a unsure of what side type of character (still is)*
POV Change (Kerry):
I was unsure whether Sammy meant to do harm or not... so I closed my eyes momentarily and asked the wind and other elements around me, just as fairies do. (I had decided that I was neglecting my fairy side too much)
They seemed to think it was fine so I let her go.
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Permalink Reply by Ina Divine on
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* Aisling whats up? You don't seem to be in a writting mood right now?!*
'' You better play nice"
POV Change (Sammy)
Or what, I thought. Finally I was free. What now?
I must learn there trust. But how? Attack is the best defence. I will make tham think that the gunman is the bad guy.
"Thanks" play nice. " You know fighting for my territory and all of that. I felt like I was in danger with the new vampire in the town." just play nice.
'' Half vampire" Dave half smiled. Well he was kind off cute.
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Permalink Reply by Aisling on
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*yeah... I'm really tired 'cos I was looking for my cat after school today for like 2 hours (she's been missing for a week)*
But he was half werewolf as well. That HAD to give him a few minus points... Wait a minute! What am I doing talking about him as if I'm about to go out with him??? Uh! He's so scum-of-the-Earth!
*P.S.... like my little scum-of-the-Earth gag? :P And btw... you know how Dave always goes 'ARGH!' Sammy's little thing like that is gunna be 'Uh!' =]*
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Permalink Reply by Blood Angel on
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*Kyle can heal and manipulate fire, kinda the way Keisha can manipulate air. I'm kinda clueless with the gunman at the moment. And I really hope you find your cat*
POV (Keisha)
I was starting to get pissed. The gunman just stood there. Why wouldn't he say anything?
"Why?" I said a little harsher. I really didn't want Dave, Kerry and Sammy know I'd had dealing with this son of a bitch before. Of course I didn't want anyone knowing about my abilities. We all know how that one went. Not only had he gone after me, he'd gone after Kyle. To this day I was convinced he was the reason behind Mom's death.
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Permalink Reply by Aisling on
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*Awesome! And thanks*
He chuckled. I clenched my fists. What was so funny?
"I work for the government." He threw his head back more and laughed even louder and more crudely.
"So?" I spat out.
He looked at me levely, no longer laughing but a huge grin on his face all the same.
"The government can't have people with powers and inhuman creatures wandering around now, can we?" He smiled even wider, I didn't think that was possible.
"You bastard!" Dave, Sammy and I yelled at him in unison. I glanced back at Kerry and had a feeling that she was thinking it, but could never swear because of the pain swearing gave her.
He laughed. Then he stopped suddenly. A look of shock in his eyes. His body slumped forward to reveal Dave there, a determined and disgusted look on his face, his nose shiveled up and a knife in his hand and the guy's back.
I was amazed.
POV Change (Dave):
I suddenly realised what I'd done. I'd killed a man. An evil, bastard man... but a man all the same. My head snapped up to Kerry. She was looking at me in a disappointed, confused way with tears in her eyes.
"Kerry!" I ran over to her, stopping before touching her, that wouldn't help the situation now. "I'm sorry... I didn't mean to... I acted without thinking... instinctively... I don't know what happened I just..." She lifted a finger and pointed behind me.
"Look..." She croaked. Even croaking her voice sounded beautiful!
I frowned in confusion, but looked where she had pointed.
I gasped. Where the gunman guy had been was now...
"A demon..." Keisha voiced it.
Chapter 7:
"The bastard! He was killing everyone that wasn't human or had super-natural powers when he wasn't even human himself!" I yell at the top of my voice, throat hurting, but anger controlling me.
Kerry touched my arm lightly. I spun round to her, slightly surprised and instantly calm.
"He was hiding from the government. The government wanted him dead... keep your friends close, but your enemies closer..." She said to me softly.
I was amazed. I looked back at him, then at Kerry again.
I grabbed her and held her in my arms, her sweet scent wafting off of her hair. I kissed it.
"Sorry I swore." I whispered.
"It's okay Dave..." She whispered back. She pulled away slightly so that we could look into each other's eyes. "Thank you for apologising..."
We started leaning into each other, as if about to kiss...
Her heart started racing... Mine would have too... We were looking deep into each other's eyes... Lips about to touch...
POV Change (Keisha):
When I noticed that Kerry and Dave were about to kiss, I turned and ran into the forest, to hide my tears from them.
Sammy followed me, to comfort me (I think).
*Hint: If anyoen wants Sammy to have any evil plans against Dave: now's the time to make her get Keisha on her side =]
And I sorted out the gunman :D Lolz*
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Permalink Reply by Ina Divine on
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"What was I even thinking ?" My voice broke as I tried to say the words.
" I'm a bit confused, aren't you two dating?" Sammy sounded friendly so I decided to give her a chance , I realy needed a talk with someone other than a lying boy and a bitchy fairy
" I thought that , too"
"Uh!" Sammy shouted in disbealive. '' Who needs them? Your better without them."
I need him, I wanted to cryout.
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Permalink Reply by Blood Angel on
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Instead I said something else.
"I don't know who I need right now," I really didn't know if I should trust Sammy. Right now I needed a vision to tell me if I could.
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Permalink Reply by Aisling on
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*I'm pretty sure no one's replying because they don't know whether to make Sammy good or bad... so I'm gunna solve it... who wanst her to be bad and who wants her to be good? (Bearing in mind the fact that Kerry was told that she'd be important... so there probably should be SOME good in her... or she could be used :P)*
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