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Permalink Reply by xXSweetheart_of_Broken DreamsXx on March 12, 2009 at 11:54pm

POV change (Dave)

I knew that she was horrified befor and I didn't wanna scare har any more,"Ohh yeah that,"what else could I say,"I didn't relize it was a two story window, but you have to say that it was a good jump,"I said with a smig grin on my face.
"Yeah it was pretty good.I have to give you that,"I new she was confused, but suprized.

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Permalink Reply by Blood Angel on March 13, 2009 at 3:44am

POV Change (Keisha)

I had to ask it.
"How did you do that without breaking anything? I mean it must take some talent," I hoped I didn't sound like I was prying.

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Permalink Reply by Aisling on March 13, 2009 at 8:52am

"Er... yeah... well..." I could see him struggling, and he blushed a little. "I... do... er... trampolining... and... er... well... I fall off a lot..."

I didn't know whether to believe him or not.

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Permalink Reply by Jennavicia Nicoal Lovak on March 13, 2009 at 9:15am

Keisha? Thats a cool name, don't mean to be to invasive, but were did u come across that name?

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Permalink Reply by Blood Angel on March 13, 2009 at 3:38pm

*It just came to me. I really don't know anyone named Keisha*

I decided to humor him.
"Trampolining, huh?" I said. "I guess you learned to land without breaking anything with all that falling off?" I smiled at him. "By the way, I'm Keisha," I added, trying to change the subject.

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Permalink Reply by Aisling on March 13, 2009 at 5:29pm

*I just realised something... HE CAN'T BLUSH! AH! Sorry about the mistake guys!*

POV change (Dave):

"Er... yeah..." I would have blushed if I was alive. "I'm Dave. And that's an interesing name. Where's it from?"

"Er... I have no idea!" She laughed and I smiled at her. Wishing myself to be alive so that I could laugh so carefree.

But then she stopped and looked at me. I mean properly LOOKED at me.

"What?" I snapped. She jumped. And again I would have blushed. "I mean... what?" I made my voice more normal.

She blushed a brilliantly ferocious red. It made her most attractive. I smiled at her.

"Nothing..." She looked away from me but then made herself look into my eyes. She was beautiful whilst blushing... and that was when I realised what was happening. She had smelled so good to me. She still smelt so good to me. And she was blushing. The red, hot, juicy, delicious blood pouring through her veins to her cheeks... I leant in a little and snapped myself out of it.

"I have to go!" I spun round on the spot, almost fell over and ran at a supernatural speed to the outside doors, leaning against the wall beside it and panting.

I was not going to kill her... but perhaps I could have some of her blood...? NO! I would NOT Imprint her! I would not make her my little Renfield... The dark thoughts at the back of my mind spoke up. But you have to drink her some time... and it's better if she survives... then there's more to drink... forever to have her...

That was when she walked straight out the doors and found me. We both froze instantly.

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Permalink Reply by Blood Angel on March 14, 2009 at 2:33am

*No problem, Aisling*

POV Change (Keisha):

I didn't understand why Dave just ran off. Maybe there was something to that vision. I walked out and froze. Dave was leaning against the wall panting. He now stood there, frozen and staring at me. I was grateful for the sudden ring of the bell. Still string at him I fumbled for my schedule list. I finally broke eye contact to see where I need to go. History. I didn't want to look back up, afraid that he wouldn't be there. What had I said?

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Permalink Reply by xXSweetheart_of_Broken DreamsXx on March 14, 2009 at 5:41am

I turned around and headed for Histor.I looked back to glance at him.He was no were in sight.
POV change (Dave):
i ran away was fast as I could.
I seen a dark part of the woods that was behind the school.I could see her looking for me but she still couldn't see me, but she stoped in the middle of the street.JUst stoped.
There was a huge truck coming for her.I ran as fast as i could to save her, but she just stood there.I ran over to her and picked her up then took her to the dark spot in the woods and set her down.
I looked up at the driver to see who it was.
it was surprizeing who it was.lail.

Permalink Reply by Princess of Shadows on November 13, 2009 at 6:28pm

*Aisling. You said that he cant blush but if he push some blood from somewhere else in his body he could a have faint rosiness in his cheeks ( that could count as a blush) just to help you out*

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Permalink Reply by Aisling on March 14, 2009 at 1:03pm

No one had seen me apart from Keisha, she was staring at me more and more.

"Argh!" I let out a cry of annoyance, not laoud enough so that anyone apart from me or Keisha could hear it. I hit myself on the head with my hands a few times. "Stupid, stupid, stupid!!!"

"You're a Vampyre, aren't you?" Keisha asked me in a strangely calm voice.

I froze in the middle of hitting my head, then slowly turned to look at her, only moving my head slightly.

She smiled. "That would explain everything then. The jumping out of the window," She started counting them off with her fingers. "the blood on your lip, the fast moving and the visio--" She cut herself off and snapped her head up to me, clearly worried about what information she'd accidentally given away.

I slowly smiled. "You see visions?" I whispered softly.

She swallowed and opened her mouth to reply but then decided against talking and nodded.

"And - more importantly - you saw a vision about ME?" I whispered softly, still smiling.

"Yes..." She tried out her voice, which came out quiet and not soudning like her voice at all.

"What happened in it?" I was smiling and then I realised that visions are normally bad. I tried to stop tears from coming, but my voice still cracked when I talked. "Who'd I kill...?"

"Uh... nothing... no one..." I looked up at her, surprised and yet knowing that she was telling the truth.

"But... visions are normally when bad things happen... aren't they?" I was confused.

"Yeah... but... this time it was more like..." She stopped to think for a little bit. "More like it was trying to tell me... tell me what you were. Not as if you were a danger..." She stopped suddenly, as if she'd remembered something. "But you're not just a vampyre... are you?" She looked deep into my eyes.

"What else did you see?" I swallowed loudly.

"You... turned into a wolf..." Her face was puzzled. Then she gasped. "I'm so stupid!" She exclaimed, smacking her hand against her forehead, reminding me of me a few moments earlier. "You're half Vamp and half Werewolf!" She exclaimed quietly.

I smiled at her and then frowned as I realised that what I was wasn't a good thing and smiling would seem as if I thought it was. "Unfortunately... yes." I replied quietly.

"Awesome." She replied. I looked up to see her beaming.

"No. It isn't." I sighed and got up.

POV Change (Sammy.):

I watched with disgust at what was being revealed. How dare he be what he is? I growled ferociously under my breath. It's people like him that are the true filth of the Earth.

"What was that?" I heard the girl say. I saw her spin round and look at me, or more where I was. She couldn't see me with her puny human eyes.

The guy just growled in my direction. I stared at him intently, he should be able to see me, but he didn't let it show.

"Keisha!" He yelled when she collapsed, she was clearly having a vision. Now was my time to pounce.

"NO!" The girl yelled. I stopped quickly, I had almost pounced, but her vision was over quicker than I would have thought it would be.

"What is it?" He asked her.

"A Vampyre." She croaked, then she turned to directly stare at me. "An evil one. About to attack us from there." She pointed a shakey finger out to me.

*Please note: Sammy is female and sorry I wrote so much... I got carried away a little bit *blush* *

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Permalink Reply by xXSweetheart_of_Broken DreamsXx on March 14, 2009 at 6:15pm

*its ok i gess.it was good*
POV change (Keisha)
I was so stupid.how could i have not seen him earlier.He was as clear as daylight.Then he pounced at Dave.
"Dave."I gasped.Covering my mouth with my hand.all of a sudden I seen what was in my vision earlier.dave changed into a werewolf then a vampire, then back again.
He snarled.what was goin on.
i couldnt figure out what was goin on.
*sorry I didn't wright much*

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Permalink Reply by Aisling on March 14, 2009 at 6:36pm

*It's okay, but I just said that Sammy's female and you put 'he'*

Who was winning? I couldn't tell. Then Dave's friend came out of nowhere. I froze. Does she know? Then I internally laughed, I hadn't realised that she was flying.

POV Change (Kerry - first time ever! xD):

There he was! And oh my word! He was in werewolf form in front of the new girl! And she'd seen me! And I was flying!

"Dave!" I shouted. They both stopped and looked up at me.

The female vampyre glared at me and snarled. "Stupid fairy! You can't do anything!" And she went to rip Dave's throat out.

I wasn't aware of what she was doing much though, through Dave's wolfy eyes I could tell that he was upset and embaressed that I'd seen him and what he was doing. He wished that I hadn't. I could tell. He didn't even move when she went for his throat.

"The fighting will stop." I said, I could feel the power in my voice.

Man! Am I glad that I'm fairy/angel! Dave always used to say how much he liked it when he heard the power in my voice, he said that it didn't sound like me, and yet it also did. He can be confusing like that at times, although he says that it's me that's confusing, 'cos he only sounds confusing to me when he's explaining me! If that makes sense...

While all of these random thoughts were bubbling through my mind I watched the Vampyre and Dave freeze and slowly move away from each other, only so that they weren't touching each other. Then they unfroze, and Dave turned back into his usual self.

The Vampyre tried to attack him again, but couldn't.

"Dave." I said, floating back down to the ground and making a soft noise as I gently landed. "What's going on?"

"Man! Am I glad to see you!" He smiled in a way I'd never seen him smile before. It was... like a mix of emotions... "And yet so unhappy that you're here..."

POV Change (Sammy):

I was so angry! How was this possible from a fairy? I waited for them to stop explaining the events to her.

"How the hell did you do that? Fucking fairy!" I let a snarl leave my throat.

*Sorry, I got carried away again*

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