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Alexander looks over, his long hair glistening in the moonlight, keeping an eye out as his prey approaches. The smell of blood rushes over in a gust of wind. His senses grow stronger as he crouches down in the bushes. He realizes how easily he could snap the tree beneath his palm like a twig. He can hear the animals crawling and creeping around the forest, also stalking prey. Finally, comming into sight, a deer. Each step bringing it closer to it's destiny. The spiked buck bows it's head taking a bit of grass, almost as if bowing to him. Alexander leaps from his hiding place and sinks his fangs into his victims flesh. The deer had hardly any time to react before he finishes it off and heads back to get some rest before school starts.
........Well it's not much of a first chapter, but this story has two perspactives...one from Alexander and one from Elizabeth...i'll get more in a while :) I don't mind if you guys can think of a name or give me some hints about what should happen on in the story......and feel free to say if you see something wrong. :) thanks! Please! dont copy right :)
........Well it's not much of a first chapter, but this story has two perspactives...one from Alexander and one from Elizabeth...i'll get more in a while :) I don't mind if you guys can think of a name or give me some hints about what should happen on in the story......and feel free to say if you see something wrong. :) thanks! Please! dont copy right :)
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Permalink Reply by Areya on -
Wow.. That's really good. Excellent. Great use of imagery. The only problem I have are some spelling mistakes but they happen all the time :P
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Permalink Reply by Anitra'sXaXvampire on -
thanks...yeah..i read over it and was like....wow....a lot of spelling mistakes......
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Permalink Reply by Anitra'sXaXvampire on
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thank you!
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Permalink Reply by ChaoticDamned on -
wow....this is pretty good. I like it =3
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Permalink Reply by Anitra'sXaXvampire on
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thanks!
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