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this is a poem i wrote a few nights ago. please comment!!!
You say im depressed,
That i need to talk.
Others tell me to be happy.
But this is what you dont see:
The darkness is a part of me,
Intencified by pain.
My tears are my weakness,
And from being happy -
I have nothing to gain.
You're trying to take away
The other half of me,
But here is the sad truth:
I might give up without this,
My resilliance to my life.
The world would be too quiet
Without my constant inner scream.
I could begin to fade away.
Without the darkness of my life
It is hard to see the light.
Without this constant nightmare
I may never know a dream.
And without this pain i'll always face
To keep me from going numb,
I might forget that im still alive.
I might forget to breathe.
That i need to talk.
Others tell me to be happy.
But this is what you dont see:
The darkness is a part of me,
Intencified by pain.
My tears are my weakness,
And from being happy -
I have nothing to gain.
You're trying to take away
The other half of me,
But here is the sad truth:
I might give up without this,
My resilliance to my life.
The world would be too quiet
Without my constant inner scream.
I could begin to fade away.
Without the darkness of my life
It is hard to see the light.
Without this constant nightmare
I may never know a dream.
And without this pain i'll always face
To keep me from going numb,
I might forget that im still alive.
I might forget to breathe.
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Permalink Reply by crescent moon on -
i love it i can re4late to it soo much in my life i think i know what ur goin through
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Permalink Reply by Michael T. Moon on -
Nice poem with a few tweeks could be really good thanks for sharing
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Permalink Reply by Paige Witschger on -
i love it i can relate to it my life has always been hard so i get depressed a lot
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Permalink Reply by Princess of Shadows on -
this is really good. i write like this a bit. check it out and tell me what you think. Yours it great. xxx
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Permalink Reply by ♥blood and razorblades♥(kirstey) on -
omg thtz amazing =D
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