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Comment by Princess of Shadows on November 11, 2009 at 5:59pm

ok people here is some of my first poems.

As the darkness ascends
a shadowy part deep within me revels in fiendish delight
The creatures of night come forth from their resting place,
Causing chaos and strife.
Before disappearing into the shadows without a trace.
Dark visions haunt me, memories that are not my own,
Visions of shadows, stalking, blood,
Powerless victims so weak and frail,
Helpless against our immense strength,
Beating a liquid fire, around inside the fragile human
Teeth sharpening and tapering into a razor point
slicing into warm, living flesh,
The liquid inferno flowing and running,
Into a scorched throat


There is sweet music here,
sweet music that mocks me,
Falling deeper into the daunting notes.
Losing myself in the darkness.

Comment by Princess of Shadows on November 11, 2009 at 5:55pm

show me please. i love your stuff. and it cant be as bad as the one i wrote last night, i couldnt sleep, was worried about stuff at school and that. so i did what calms me down the most - write- so herre it is. btw i havent edited it or anything so it is gonna be worse in some places sorry for those. but other than that it is pretty self explanitry.

a world of dreams

i cant sleep,
cant eat,
all these problems,
keep me from a peaceful escape,
its all a mask,
designed to hide,
my true emotions,
no one knows what,
i really feel like inside,
how can they even hope,
to figure it out,
full of deciet,
false hopes,
false dreams,
everything i do,
is always wrong,
always a failure,
i cant cope,
someone help me escape
this harsh prison of mine,
end my suffering
and release me into,
a world of dreams.

Comment by ♥blood and razorblades♥(kirstey) on November 11, 2009 at 4:45pm

omg you read my stuff? :/ i thiink am bad i have wrote some new stuff but am scared what people are going to think :/ and yeah i hate how people judge :(

Comment by Princess of Shadows on November 10, 2009 at 9:27pm

no problem,

Comment by Blood rose (rachel hehehe) on November 10, 2009 at 9:24pm

thanks

Comment by Princess of Shadows on November 10, 2009 at 8:28pm

Blood rose, some people express thier emotions in different way like: song writing, music or even self-harming. writing is just another way of that

Comment by Princess of Shadows on November 10, 2009 at 8:27pm

suicidal romance, ive read you stuff and i love it! and i feel the same way. No one judges you cos they cant see it

Comment by ♥blood and razorblades♥(kirstey) on November 10, 2009 at 4:29pm

ohhh i write beacuse it gives me a chance to let my emotions out and not on people :) i dont read much lol so i cant awnser tht :(

Comment by Blood rose (rachel hehehe) on November 9, 2009 at 9:04pm

can u tell me y do u write and read? (anyone) why u like it? what it does for ya?

Comment by Princess of Shadows on November 8, 2009 at 9:55pm

Princess of Shadows

Darkness falls,
Slowly surrounding the last beams of daylight,
Inclosing it,
Consuming it,
Laid in the fading circle of the suns glow,
For the dying light I weep,
And for the expanding shadows,
I revel in this gloomy night,
Exposing my true nature,
As a Princess of Shadows.

Unable to show emotion,
Unable to breathe,
Surrounded by people
Clouded by judgement,
So obvious in their eyes,
No one understands,
And yet they still criticize,
Unappreciated, unloved,
And truly alone.

Stood out in the rain,
The sky as black
As my heart,
The tears streaming down my face,
And red as a midnight sun.
No matter how dark something,
Might seem,
There is always a little bit of brightness,
Hidden away,
Behind a mask,
Buried deep,
In the core of a broken shadow

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