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Comment by Michael T. Moon 20 hours ago

Well from the poems you write I hope I never inspire any unless you change the theme ;p
I will check out the taster as you call it and let you know

Comment by Princess of Shadows 1 day ago

Thnx michael
couldnt think of one and being ill doesnt help with coming up with names lol
im working on my book right now so there wont be anymore poems for a whie unless i get inspired ;) check out the taster i posted and tell me if u want me to post the rest xxx

Comment by Michael T. Moon on November 18, 2009 at 11:16pm

Hopeless Voice for the nameless poem just a suggestion and I like the new one

Comment by Princess of Shadows on November 17, 2009 at 7:56pm

The pain of a Broken Heart

Close your eyes,
Let the darkness rush in,
And take away the pain,
Its killing you,
Gnawing its way deeper,
Into your broken heart,
A heart that weeps the bloody tears of your loss,
So lay down to rest,
Close your eyes,
And let the darkness rush in,
Before you die broken-hearted death.

Comment by Princess of Shadows on November 17, 2009 at 7:55pm

Another nameless poem lol, i just cant seem to come up with a name.

This hopeless voice in side of me,
Weeps at the pain of just four words,
My heart shatters and cries the bloody tears of heart break,
When you walk away,
Stiff and uncaring,
I know I am truly alone,
You never loved me,
When I gave you my heart,
You took it for granted,
Said it was worthless,
And yet when I first gave it to you,
You said it was the greatest gift of all,
Now I know it was all a lie,
So I will run away,
And let a darkness settle over me,
A form of sleep,
That will take the pain away,
And keep it at bay,
A sleep from which I shall never awaken,
Wherein I lay,
While my life’s blood drips,
From my lifeless fingertips,
Where I am at peace at last.

Comment by Princess of Shadows on November 17, 2009 at 7:35pm

Thank i like it too.

Comment by Michael T. Moon on November 17, 2009 at 2:02pm

Princess of Shadows I like Sorry Shadow for a title

Comment by Christy Sinner on November 17, 2009 at 7:47am

Anyone on from Colorado Besides me?

Comment by Princess of Shadows on November 16, 2009 at 5:39pm

I'm always ignored,
As if I don't exist,
A sorry shadow,
hidden away in a long forgotten corner,
I put on a brave face,
to show the world I don't care,
But really its eating me upside,
like living in my own personal hell,
where I cease to matter,
to exist,
where I am nothing,
But a sorry shadow,
hidden away in a long forgotten corner,
to remain this way for the rest of eternity.

Any ideas on a title? x

Comment by Princess of Shadows on November 14, 2009 at 12:22am

Check it out ive posted it and your poem is awsome i love it

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