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Comment by Jike on August 27, 2009 at 4:21am

Dead Inside Poem : By Jike

Mystical relics below
And high rocky mountains
Flat grassy plains
And bright blue skies
The dense fog filled valleys
And clouds stirring above
The skies fade to black
Night stars descipate
The moon disappears
Embodied within flesh
Flowing blood coursing through veins
Radiant days become darkened night rains
Embracing now the darkest hour
Shadowed within a lonely soul
The raging flames that flicker out
Inside a mind the torment and shouts
Shuddering winds blowing so fierce
Fiery eyes burning like mad
Underground away from the world
Alive but dying but im already dead
Dead but alive . . .
Alive but im dead . . .
Im dying alive . . .
But im already dead . . .
Im already dead . . .
Im dead already . . .
Already im dead . . .
Dead all along . . .
All along i've been dead . . .
~ Jike ~

Comment by Jike on August 27, 2009 at 4:21am

Thank you Vampire Sighs, for your concern.. just a few days in jail and a little while on house arrest, a huge fine some classes and 6 months probation, it sucks but i should be okay otherwise.. but thanks for your care and concern, greatly appreciated friend.. and Sarah suicide nice poem its really colorful and full of emotion, really great writing, keep on it, i like reading your work, truly good stuff hun.. hope to read more from all of yinz when you post it up, i will read everything and anything from anyone who will put their work out there for all of us to read, and as always i will comment, individually, on everyones work of art, you all are the ones who keep this group alive, so keep it up, and you all have my deepest admiration, and most grateful respect, honestly .. so please help expand this group and help me to make it grow, so if you know anyone who writes or just likes to read poetry, or just writes or reads in general, please, refer them to this group and welcome anyone, and read and comment on others work as they will yours .... but it is great to run this group and see all of you having the courage to write and express your feelings and emotions, yinz all have my gratitude... so please help me to invite more people, even try to send a group invite to all of the people on your friend list, the more the merrier... so thats all i have for now .. but heres a poem i was working on lately, hope ya like . . . . Jike

Comment by xxStitchedxxRagxxDollxx on August 25, 2009 at 4:57am

This poem is dedicated to the asshole that was my ex best friend/bf
"I Dont Care"
I smell your fear
I know your pain
I see your tears
I DONT CARE
You left me here
You killed my soul
You broke my heart
And stomped on the pieces
You cut me up
And never cared
So I dont care
You can feel this pain
Its not nearly what I felt
You can cry me a river
I'll push you in
You can tell me you're scared
I'll show you the meaning of fear
I loved you so much
But you broke me
Now I have to hate you
To end the pain
So don't beg me for forgiveness
It won't come
You're wasting my time
I dont care anymore

Comment by xxStitchedxxRagxxDollxx on August 25, 2009 at 4:56am

Thnxz for your comments on my poems Jike, and good luck with everything you're going through.

Comment by Vampire Sighs on August 23, 2009 at 1:51am

Jike - good luck - hope you get through ok ah

Comment by Jike on August 22, 2009 at 11:07pm

Alone : Poem By Jike

Tis the night for which i live
My heart my soul i wish to give
I've lived in liez so long i believed
Only myself have i deceived

Knowing the truth, knowing the facts
Only the lies, by shadows i cast
Clouded by darkness, that hordes the light
Unseen by day, awakened at night

You're the one for whom i've longed
The only one that to these eyes belong
The burning flame that flickers out
A silent voice in mind that tries to shout

I am not seen, nor am i heard
Only expression, is through written word
See my image and hear my voice
For i am alone, thus lonliness is my choice
~Jike~

Comment by Jike on August 22, 2009 at 11:06pm

Okay ... Vamp Sighs, i like it.. sounds familiar, are you spying on me .. lol ... But its good, and i relate to your written words..
Johns Saviour, great stuff.. you have a very unique way of putting words together, it is very well written and flows great....
Sarah Suicide.. I like the work, and its great as usual, i relate to it for the most part, love does hurt, and people never understand how we feel, only us inside of ourselves understand.. no one is psychic and can feel what we feel as individuals, great work, keep it up ..... Reegan, great poem, short sweet and to the point, i like it alot... Rosemary i like your work also, its very good and well written, keep it up ..... Jike

Comment by Jike on August 22, 2009 at 10:56pm

Again, i apologize for the absence, i been having a rough time this month.. as i said i was in a detox for a week.. and before the detox, i was in jail for a day for a DUI.. and i just went to my preliminary hearing last week, and i got a plea bargain to spend 3 to 6 days in allegheney county jail, then 30 days of restricted confinement (house arrest), drug and alcohol evaluation n treatment, highway safety courses, and $ 1000 fine plus court cost.. but my liscense will not be suspended.. it sucks, so i go back to court in 18 days for my sentencing, and i will be in county jail for a few days (its stupid that they do that) but from the 10th til the 16th i will be sittin in jail, and ill be out and stuck here at home for 30 days on house arrest, and 6 months of probation which runs concurrent with my sentence and it starts the day i go to jail... so yea, it has been overwhelming this month, my life sucks ... but again i apologize ... Jike

Comment by Vampire Sighs on August 22, 2009 at 8:59am

She didn’t have a good night.
Too much....
Can’t walk down the street properly.
Leans into a doorway and vomits.
Sinks to her knees and tries to sleep.
Suburban people pass.
A cool young couple
just moved to the city.
She ok?
Poor thing....
Druggy drunk ...
they want to express something.
Hard to say what.
She opens black
blank
eyes
to them.

They walk away saying nothing.

Comment by Rachel on August 22, 2009 at 6:31am

Change...
It defines us...
Not how we react to it
But how well we adapt
not during but after
A sweet song of laughter
coming from a child
so innocent
so sweet
so pure and simple
living like a flower
searching for the sun
the one source of life
its one source of fun

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