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Comment by Akasha on November 15, 2009 at 5:14am

ah, no worries, i found it

Comment by Akasha on November 15, 2009 at 5:13am

Hey chris, i want to read your story if its a horror, but i don't know how to get to it, please don't think im retarded, im new here=)

Comment by Akasha on November 15, 2009 at 5:04am

how do i go about posting my shit up? i've only just started writing, because i saw this group and thought it was cool that you guys write stories and poetry. i just want someone to read and review my story because im pretty sure its shit, and i dont want to waste everyones time.

Comment by chris smith on October 4, 2009 at 5:41pm

Let me know what you think of "Path" my friends

Comment by E'lisabeth Bone(Chris Wifey) on October 4, 2009 at 5:39pm

my work isnt very good so dont be harsh about if i put it up

Comment by DarkSketch on September 18, 2009 at 9:09pm

Thanx ^_^

Comment by Jike on September 17, 2009 at 11:04pm

Good start Dark Sketch .. its a vampire story, im gonna love it .. i cant wait til you post more.. its interesting so far ... i will check back to see when you add more .... Jike

Comment by DarkSketch on September 17, 2009 at 12:45am

SHORT SUMMARY OF CHAPTER ONE:DREAM
Daniel was living a normal everyday life with a family and friends but when she was on her way home from school she mysteriously passed out and all she saw during that time was a dream relm with Dreamer who tells her shes different but cant tell her why and warns her about the future if she doesn't take on her destiny.In the end its leaving Daniel with more questions then answers.
CHAPTER 2:ESCAPE
Waking up in the hospital was the weirdest thing ever. Everything is white ans silent that all you can hear us the machines in the room, Danielle was strapped to bed. Tired sore, and annoyed by the fact that she is chained to the bed, With no way to escape. She passes out again. Please let this be a nightmare she thought. All she can hear is murmurs outside the door. Then hears a voice say "Shh, Don't worry I got you." As she is lifted up from the bed and hears a thunk on the ground. As a voice keeps saying "Stay with me Danie,stay with me." Danielle groans feeling like shes been hit on the head. As her eyes open to see her prince charming in the drivers seat. Laying in the back seat of the car she couldn't move. Nor could she tell who her rescuer was. Lights flash in her eyes as her rescuer drives. In pain she said "Whats going on?Who are you?". Desperate to find answers she looks into the mirror to meet his eyes.With out blinking he says "It's me Nick, Danie you were kidnapped and drugged badly. When you didn't answer my messages, I got worried and came to check up on you." He sighs keeping his eyes on the road. Daniel knew he wasn't ling to her so she said "So the drugs are the reason why I can't move?". He nods and keeps driving on the high way. Daniel winces in pain a little bit. "You should rest more. I'll wake you up once we get somewhere safe." She was about to deny that she wasn't tired at all when he started to hum her to sleep so she couldn't argue. Once she was asleep he stopped humming and drove to a hidden shack in the woods. The shack was meant to be a retreat to those who needed it the most. As he parks the car he said "Wake up. We're up." Danielle wakes up still feeling sore.Nick comes around to her sides and pulls her out and carries her into the shack. Then lays her down on the couch and sighs as he sits next to her and says "the drugs aren't wearing off and you have been poisoned." Danielle starts to cry as she thinks this is the end for her while the irony is she meets her true love this way in person. He wipes her tears away and kisses her forehead. "Your not going to die you have a choice." Nick says as he looks at her dieing. "Whats my choice?what are my choices?" She asks feeling more sore than before. "Choice one you die.Choice two you'll let me change you into a vampire and live. Well sort of live."Danielle thought about those choices and chose becoming a vampire.
She breathed and said "Change me into a vampire. He nods and brings her up so shes sitting up. Gently moving a piece of her long brown hair he exposes her bare neck and sinks his fangs in. Then pulling them out as he injects the venom in veins. She winces in pain as he says "Hang in there it will be over soon. Just don't pass out on me." Holding her hand as she winces in pain holding back screams.As soon as it was over she looks a nick with a burning throat on her mind. Nick smiles and pulls down his shirt collar exposing his bare neck and says "Bite me." As her fangs grow in she sinks them in to his neck and feeds feverishly as her eyes start to turn white. He pushes her off as her fangs grow back in. His blood tasted like a forbidden fruit that was addicting. Smiling he asks "Feeling better?" she nods. The lurid fact of her being drugged and poisoned was nagging on her. with a kiss he pushed the thoughts out of her mind and replaced them with good ones. Their lips lock and once they do the atmosphere changes.Somethings wrong so Nick carefully looks out the window. Nothing but trees and bright lights."What the? How did they find us?" Nick says. Danielle shrugs and stands up and walks to the back door."Time to go." she says. As they leave and enter the forest green jeep they leave driving toward Seattle. On the way there no one talked until Nick asks "Whats on your mind?" Danielle sighs and says "Before i passed out on the bus i was with Gem and we were planning a trip up to Seattle. Last thing I remember was being on the bus and passing out as i hear Gem calling my name." "So your worried about her." She nods as they keep driving and thinking of what they are going to do there when they arrive.

Comment by Jike on September 8, 2009 at 1:38am

yeah chris, this is my group .. so you can put any kind of story you want up on here .... Jike

Comment by annixandra lightwing on September 7, 2009 at 5:39pm

ya u are

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