My latest Story

Hey My name is Steph and I have been writing stories for quite a long time (Two years to be accurate). I had started on writing romance novels but I thought it was too sappy so I am strting with Vampire novels, I'm doing short stories first. The first one is called 'Remember the time' it is a vampire and a hunter trying to remember there hot passion they did a few years before. Can anyone give a review of what this and maybe I will post the story out soon, as it is on paper and not computer.