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Writing a story together

Anyone will be allowed to write any amount of it as you like, just do not dominate the story.

To continue the story: Reply to the last person to write a bit.
To comment on the story/suggest something that could happen but not written out: Do not reply to any specific person.

(Btw if it turns out good I will try and get it published, but we will all get credit, don't worry)

It can be about... an ordinary school where everyone is supernatural, but everyone keeps it a secret (apart from occasional telling it to your best friend) so no one knows that everyone is :P So perhaps we could have it going to different people's point of view at times. (At which case please state that it has changed POV)

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Permalink Reply by Ina Divine on March 27, 2009 at 3:16pm: * I want her to be bad, lolz*

Permalink Reply by oneofakindvampire on March 27, 2009 at 9:50pm: she moved closer to me and all my sences screamed out to be careful. it wasn't long go that she was ripping me to pieces this could all be another rouse for her to get what she wanted. why was it when i wanted a vision i could never have one.

*i know it's oly short, but its my first time*

Permalink Reply by Ina Divine on March 29, 2009 at 5:30pm: * mine is always short lolz*

We walked deeper into the forest.

POV Change (Dave)

What is wrong with me?
I felt her pain but still I wanted to stay here with Kerry. To keep her light body in my embrace, kiss the angel that she was. Pure goodness.
" We should find them"
I brock the spel and Kerry was no more in my arms.
She looked at my eyes and she seemed unwilling to do so.
But she was pure goodness '' We should , probablye"

Permalink Reply by Aisling on March 31, 2009 at 4:39pm: "Kerry..." I sighed. "I'm sorry... I never should have..." I sighed again.

She smiled at me in a pitying way and then slowly and gently reached up to me and kissed me, gently but surely.

"I don't mind. I liked it." She smiled at me.

"But..." I utter a harsh sigh and look away from her. "We shouldn't even be friends let alone..."

"Dave... what ARE you talking about?" She seemed actually confused.

"I'm pure evil and you're pure goodness..."

"No you're not. You know you're not." She forced me to look at her. "I love you Dave."

I was shocked. How could she...? I thought she'd hate me... after...

She giggled lightly at my face.

"Oh. Er... I love you too of course... I was just... momentarily shocked..." I stuttered it all out.

She giggled again. "I know you do."

And she kissed me.

And suddenly I was no longer a vampire/werewolf. I was a fairy/angel with her... no longer evil in the slightest.

I was in heaven.

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Permalink Reply by Banana Babe XD on April 1, 2009 at 12:08am: Still chapter 7:
*ok, it's my first time so if it doesn't make sense i can delete it. This is the day afterwards. Can I create another character? She is the only one in the school who knows what everyone is and shes also a witch.*

POV to Aliah (new character)

I sat on the edge of my bed and reached out with my senses, furthur and furthur. That's weird. Seems like Kerry, Kiesha, Dave and Sammy have joined forces... but there's a fight going on. Maybe I should go help? I pondered about this for a second longer. No, it's better this way, after all, they don't know anything. Not yet anyways. When the time comes I'll be there to help, not yet. I ignored my surroundings and instead focused on my potion.

My grandmother says that if I ever want to be as good as her, I have to practise alot. Being a witch was so annoying if you were horrible at cooking. I'm hopeless at mixing potions. My mum jokes that I'm the worst witch there ever was. She's probably right. Weirder than that is, even though my parents are both wiccan, I have the ability of telekinesis. At least I'm not bad in everything.

I should forget about being a witch completely. Screw the stupid potion, which was now bubbling and turning rather green in colour. I got up from the bed and threw away the whole thing. I wish I could be normal. Not a witch, not having special abilities, but what's the point of trying when my whole school is special. It's kind or ironic. Everyone's special but no one knows it. I'm just the cursed one that has to know, such a bother having to keep everyone's secret. I'm sure that someday i'll spontaniously combust! Why does a girl my age, need to have so much to carry on her own? Oh well, it's just the curse, the curse that I alone have to carry. For once, I decided to do what any girl my age would do. I went to sleep.

I usualy just stayed up all night, I didn't need to sleep and witches couldn't dream but I wanted a shred of normal in my life so I fell asleep, an empty dreamless sleep.

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Permalink Reply by Solumn Salem on April 1, 2009 at 12:54am: 'POV CHANGE (Dave)
After this latest dangerous encounter I realized that it was too dangerous for Kerry and I to be together. We couldn't even be friends. We were opposites. We don't belong together. I knew she would never leave without asking questions. Wanting answers. Answers I could never give. How could I get her to just leave and never come near me again? I would have to think of a plan.

The next morning I walked into school. Painfully aware of the dreadful task I was about to perform. I knew I loved Kerry. How was I going to do this? "Oh if there was ever any doubt that I'm going to hell there isn't anymore!" I muttered to myself. Last night I had spent hours thinking of a plan. I would have to hurt her. Enough so that she would never want to see me again. No matter how much it would hurt her, I knew it would hurt me twice as much.
"Oh shit!" I whispered to myself as a saw her looking as perfect as ever coming down the hall. "I can't do this!" I said. Yet I knew I would have to.I could live with myself hurting her to save her. But I just couldn't go on if she died and I knew there was something I could have done.
"Hi Dave!" Kerry said as cheerful as ever.
"Hey" I said. Oh how could I break her heart?; ▶ Reply to This

Permalink Reply by Banana Babe XD on April 1, 2009 at 1:05am: *Aliah is one of the most powerful at the school. Her other and last power is that if she kisses or becomes emotionally attached (etc..)to someone, she can start to read their mind.*

I just couldn't do it, I had to get away from her. Clear my mind.
"I have to go" I told her and walked away. I hoped she wouldn't follow me. She didn't.

I headed in the direction of outside.

POV CHANGE (Aliah)

I'm tired of playing the good witch. I want to find out what's going on with Dave and his friends. They seem different. I want to have fun and I knew of the perfect way to do it.

I saw Dave walk outside. Ths is the operfect opportunity. I didn't have any friends at this school but it was never too late.; ▶ Reply to This

Permalink Reply by Blood Angel on April 1, 2009 at 4:28am: POV Change (Keisha)

I didn't go home last night. I couldn't go home looking like I'd either been in a fight (which I had) or been hit by a truck. Kerry had let me stay with her and I was able to call Dad. The conversation I had with him was still running in my mind.

"Kiesha! Where are you?"
"I'm fine, Dad. But I can't come home right now,"
"What? Why?"
"Just trust me. I've never given you a reason not to,"
"Is is anything to do with your visions?"
"Yes," I lied. Kerry had stiffened. "Sorry," I mouthed.
"Alright. I'll retract the missing persons report,"
"Thanks, Dad,"
"I love you, honey,"
"I love you, too," I started to hang up. "Oh, Dad?"
"Yeah,"
"Careful on that sharp turn in the rain,"

Kerry had lent me a change of clothes. I looked up and saw Kyle heading towards me. I knew this was the real Kyle.
"Keisha!" He grabbed my arms. "You ok? You had us worried sick!"
"Sorry,"
"What's going on?"
"I can't tell you,"
"You can tell me. I'm your brother!"
"I know. I just can't. You wouldn't understand,"
"Keisha. We're both special and your telling me I wouldn't understand," Behind Kyle I saw the scene between Dave and Kerry. I pushed past him and went over to Kerry.
"What was --," I stopped, my eyes unfocused. A girl I'd never seen before was kissing Dave passionatly. Wind wirled around them. I knew they had connected on some level. I focused again. Kyle had joined us.
"You ok, Keisha?" I nodded.
"Where's Dave?" Kerry shook her head
"What did you see?"

POV Change (Kyle)

She knew?
"I thought you weren't going to tell anyone about that? And who's Dave?"
"Shut up, Kyle! Not now,"
"What did you see, Keisha?"
"A girl kissed Dave. I think who ever she is is trying to connect with him,"
"What makes you think that?"
"It's a feeling,"

*sorry. I think I got a little carried away*; ▶ Reply to This

Permalink Reply by Aisling on April 1, 2009 at 6:22pm: *It's excellant! xD Btw! Good character Stephie! + brilliant writing! =D Oh. And welcome to the story =]*

POV Change (Dave):

Okay... take this one step at a time... remember... Kerry will be there... ignore her... ignore her? Is that the best I can do...? A thought suddenly struck me. Kerry will know when I lie. My plan's not going to work then...

Another thought suddenly struck me. A new plan. A horrific one. That wouldn't envolve talking... Oh, shit... Now that I'd thought of it... I'd have to do it... Shit, shit, shit!

Hell, here I come!

POV Change (Kerry):

Something was up with Dave in maths. I don't know what but it bothered me. He didn't answer any questions and he ran vampiricly through the door as soon as the bell went. He was acting very suspicious...

POV Change (Keisha):

"So do you know what happened with Dave in maths?" Kerry asked me at lunch, biting into a cucumber and ham sandwich.

"No. I was hoping you would." I sigh slightly, stirring the pasta salad around pointlessly in my lunch box. I was thinking too much to eat. And I know that sounds odd. But when it's miserable thoughts... well... I just can't.

"There he is now..." Kerry swallowed her bite of sandwich prematurely to say. Her eyes clearly following him walking behind me.

I swiveled round on the bench that we were sitting at and saw Dave staring at Kerry painfully. Then he looked away. The bright sunlight shimmered off of the tears in his eyes as he turned.

POV Change (Dave):

Okay... after-school... come on Dave... it's time...

I take a deep breath. My thoughts not really helping me gain courage in the slightest.

"Kerry. May I go to yours tonight?" I look down whilst asking her.

"Of course!" I hear the beam in her voice.

"Thanks." My voice is still unusually quiet. I hope it won't give me away.

The plan is in motion.

POV Change (Kerry):

I thought Dave was avoiding me. But if he wants to come round tonight... that's a good sign... right?

Chapter 9:

Wrong. Pain. Blood. Confusion. Dave. Tears. Mine. His. Screams. His. Mine. R-A-P-E.

POV Change (Dave):

I ran from Kerry's straight after my plan had been carried out. I had tried to hold back my tears but I couldn't. I hated myself. No matter how much she now hates me, I hate myself more. Her blood. Her tears. Her pain. My train ride to hell.

POV Change (Aliah):

I saw Dave running at a human pace home, crying.

(Sorry. I REALLY got carried away... and so many POV changes in one go! Soz.*; ▶ Reply to This

Permalink Reply by Banana Babe XD on April 1, 2009 at 6:30pm: *Thx, i just thought that there was a mixture of everything except witches. By the Way, Aliah hasn't discovered her power to hear people who she's close to's thoughts...yet. I have to go so I'm not going to write anything.*; ▶ Reply to This

Permalink Reply by Blood Angel on April 1, 2009 at 9:47pm: *Holy Shit! What the hell's wrong with Dave? I really don't know how to follow up with that.*; ▶ Reply to This

Permalink Reply by Banana Babe XD on April 1, 2009 at 10:08pm: *maybe hes just really confused about everything and doesnt know wt to do.*; ▶ Reply to This