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Writing a story together

Anyone will be allowed to write any amount of it as you like, just do not dominate the story.

To continue the story: Reply to the last person to write a bit.
To comment on the story/suggest something that could happen but not written out: Do not reply to any specific person.

(Btw if it turns out good I will try and get it published, but we will all get credit, don't worry)

It can be about... an ordinary school where everyone is supernatural, but everyone keeps it a secret (apart from occasional telling it to your best friend) so no one knows that everyone is :P So perhaps we could have it going to different people's point of view at times. (At which case please state that it has changed POV)

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Permalink Reply by Blood Angel on July 21, 2009 at 10:11pm: POV Change (Keisha)

We found our way, thanks to Aliah's orb, only to find Dave and Sammy had gotten into it.
"What'd you two do now?"; ▶ Reply to This

Permalink Reply by Aisling on July 22, 2009 at 8:46am: "She needed it." Dave replied, not even looking at me. He was fiddling about with a lock of Kerry's hair.

I felt myself fill with anger.

"Calm." Aliah said softly in my ear, placing a hand on my shoulder. I instantly relaxed, and I don't think it was a spell.

"The deed is done. The debt forgotten. The piper paid." Dave started blabbering on about the same thing just in different ways of saying them.

"What are you blabbering about?" Kyle almost yelled at him. I could see that he was being angry for me. My heart softened with sibling love for him. It's times like this that you really and truly see the bond between us.

Dave turned round to face him. "She was there for me when I needed help. And I was here for her when she did." He smiled before turning back to Kerry.

"What the fuck?" Kyle started shouting. "What the hell's wrong with you? Stupid fucking Vampires!" I'd never heard Kyle swear so much before.

Dave turned round slowly. His face was full of pain and anger.

"What the fuck? You're one to fucking talk aren't you?!" Dave started yelling back after getting up.

"At least I don't start kissing every girl in sight!" Kyle started making mock-kissing noises.

"At least I don't get lost in the woods! What kind of an idiot does that?" Dave was scorning Kyle, although you could plaingly see that he was hiding his pain, as Kyle was.

"At least I'm not a fucking demon!" Kyle yelled back in response, he doesn't like getting lost, his face had gone bright pink with embarressment.

Dave opened his mouth to respond, but paused; it was clear that Kyle had hit a nerve. He turned around and started to walk away.

"Dave! Dave!" Kerry tried to stop him but gave up and ran to catch up with him, after a hurt look back at Kyle.

Kyle was looking very ashamed of himself, he didn't usually fight he says that only bullies really fight.

"Kyle!" I tried going to him, I even reached out my hand towards him, he hurt to look at him like this.

"Don't." He didn't yell it, but it was as loud as that; unless it was that everything else went quiet. He started walking away, face downward and I followed.

"Kyle..." I sighed and trotted after him.

POV Change (Aliah):

Dave and Kyle were going at it like tigers! Then suddenly Kyle called Dave a demon and I instantly knew that the quest wouldn't be able to start for a while. I watched Dave more than Kyle because Dave is more prone to doing stupid things when he's upset. I watched him walk away, Kerry running after him before he turned on her, yelling.

"Don't Kerry! He's right!" He yelled before turning back round and going quicker than he was before.

"Dave!" Kerry continued after him.

"Kerry!" Dave positively screeched at her and hit out at her, catching her in the stomach before she promptly fell over.

"See!" He yelled, before talking extremely quietly. "What kind of monster could hurt an angel or a fairy? Let alone one that both..." And he ran off.

"It's like a bloody soap!" I muttered to myself.

POV Change (Matt):

I watched Keisha all the way throuoghout the fight between her brother and her love. You could see how much it hurt her and I just longed to hold her, hold her as closely as possible, but I couldn't.

I watched her walk off with her brother after the fight and thought about going after them but decided against it; they needed some alone time.

"It's like a bloody soap!" I heard Aliah say to herself beside me.

And I knew that she was right.

Chapter 14 (I think):

*I like paranormal high BUT I reckon that we should write more after this and make it a series and that could be what the series is called and this book could be called "The Quest." What'd you think?

And btw I probably won't be able to write much (and haven't been) because I'm filming a YouTube series atm. I'm in tracking bottoms for it as we speak (I feel like a chav ]..[ Also the quest could be that they all have to get along and get the "evil bad guy" who isn't actually that evil at the moment (Lila) to get along with them as well, as one little thing like lots of paranormal creatures, including werewolves and vampires to get along could have an impact on the whole world, because at the moment, the way things are going the world would be destroyed within a century, so they are trying to get it so that it won't get destroyed by the war that would destroy "The War of The Species", that Lila would evidentally start. what'd you guys think?*

Permalink Reply by Banana Babe XD on July 22, 2009 at 12:17pm: *I totally love the idea. So if everyone agrees it will be called "Paranormal High: The quest" Ugh I totally hate t when Dave hits! *; ▶ Reply to This

Permalink Reply by Ina Divine on July 22, 2009 at 3:04pm: " Why don't you go after her, you know , she's not that angry with you anymore. " Aliah told me as she wiped the blood from Sammys face with a part of her shirt.
" You hurt her feelings ,you know." she gone on " She's fond of you." She smiled.
"But she loves Dave..." You could hear pain in my voice.
"She's opsessed with Dave." She cut me off.
I stoped for a secund or two.
" You should fight for what you want. You see we all fight once in a while. " She pointed at Sammy and quietly laught.
"Thanx.." I responded
"What are friends for!?"

POV change Aliah

I tought about that for a while. They are my friends. I have friends. It's like this curse was starting to be a good thing. I don't know.
" She's fond of me?" He interrupted my thoughts.
"Well she whouldn't be hurt that much because you slept with Sammy." I saw pain in his eyes as I said that he hurt her and regreted using that word.
" She's fine."
" I don't want to be like Dave and.."
" He's hurting to ,you know, he's not a bad guy as he seems." I didn't let him finish.
He got angry a little but didn't say anything.
" I'm not defending him , I'm just saying that he doesn't need others to tell him his evil, he thinks that himself."
"I'm not sorry I told you that. " But he was sorry I knew it.
" You just said what you thought and I'm not blaming you for that. I wont ,never."

POV change Sammy

I opened my eyes. Everything was dark.
"Sammy , your alright. " Aliah was helping me to get up.
" Where is everyone?" I searched around and saw just Aliah and Mett. " What is Mett doing?"
" Everyone has gone to the woods. Mett is searching for Keisha and Kyle." She explained.
" I'm sorry about that beating thing , I tought you were killing Dave."
" No problem, and just so you know I wasn't. " I half smiled. " What happened while I was "out"?"
" Kyle and Dave had a fight and they both got realy upset .." I saw that she was hidding something.
" That's not all , is it?"
" Kyle called him a demon." She frowned at the memory.
" Oh, Kyle hit the spot. Dave is in pain. " He needs me I tought.
"Yeah." She comfirmed .
" I can help you find them. " And just than I cought the scent of something . My throught burned with pain.
" Blood. Keisha. She needs our help."
"What?!"
I didn't realise that Mett was back , well his spirit.

* Sorry I wrote so much , I couldn't stop myself. I agree with " Paranormal High: The quest!!! *; ▶ Reply to This

Permalink Reply by Blood Angel on July 22, 2009 at 6:39pm: *I also agree with Paranormal High: The Quest

What did Keisha get into now?*; ▶ Reply to This

Permalink Reply by Aisling on July 22, 2009 at 6:57pm: *Ina, it's fine. But why did Matt change to "Mett"??? o.O

And I take it no one knowshow to pronounce Keisha or aliah 'cos no one replied to the question...?*; ▶ Reply to This

Permalink Reply by Ina Divine on July 22, 2009 at 7:10pm: * Sorry about the Mett thing , I mean Matt , lol :) and what about Keisha and Aliah ? And Keisha fell somehow somewhere where Kyle can't reach her and she's bleeding very bad or anything you want :) *; ▶ Reply to This

Permalink Reply by Blood Angel on July 22, 2009 at 7:35pm: *I swear that girl has a death wish :P*

POV Change (Kyle)

I had left the group to be alone, but i could feel Keisha following me. The suddenly I heard her scream. I turned and ran.
"Keisha!" She didn't answer. I felt that she was below me. "Keisha!" In the moonlight, I could see a hole. I couldn't see down it, but I knew Keisha was there. "KEISHA!"; ▶ Reply to This

Permalink Reply by Ina Divine on July 22, 2009 at 8:58pm: POV Change Sammy

Matt was running in the same secund. Aliah and I started too. But than I stoped.
Aliah looked at me. She was confused.
" I can't be that near her, all that blood and I haven't hunted for a while. I don't want to risk her life."
"What can I do?'' Aliah was scared now.
" You don't have to be scared , I'm not going to snap. We don't have the time for this. I'll go find Dave and Kerry , you go with Matt. "
She was gone.
I searched for Daves scent trying not to think about Keishas blood. I found them. I ran.
" Dave. Kerry." I was screaming now.
" Whats wrong?" Kerry asked.
"Keisha" I was trying to brid." She's bleeding , and somehow Kyle can't reach her. I can't go there right now. She needs Daves help."
" I can't help her, I can't help anyone." Dave was still depresed.
"Dave we have no time to fight and we can't always fight when we are pissed. Keisha is dying. She realy needs you. Snap out of it. "
" I can't." Dave was almost crying.
I took his head in my heands. " Dave look at me. Your not evil. Now is the chance to prove that to others and yourself. Dave please. " I was pleading.

* I think that it whould be cool to start the next reply with pov change matt, but you don't have to do so.*; ▶ Reply to This

Permalink Reply by Aisling on July 22, 2009 at 9:26pm: *ZOMG AWESOME! Would write but am too depressed to do so; I'd probably just kill off all the characters lol ^_^*; ▶ Reply to This

Permalink Reply by Aisling on July 22, 2009 at 8:54pm: *That's okay =] And about how to pronounce them*; ▶ Reply to This

Permalink Reply by Banana Babe XD on July 22, 2009 at 9:05pm: *As far as I know you pronounce Kiesha: Key-sha and aliah: Al-i-ya (all of the A are the same as how you pronounce the a in ex: cart and the i that I used for Aliah is the same as: I wen shopping) I hope you can understand. Haha its true its like she does have a death wish. I would reply but I'm kinda confused where everyone is. Like who's with who?*; ▶ Reply to This