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Writing a story together
Anyone will be allowed to write any amount of it as you like, just do not dominate the story.
To continue the story: Reply to the last person to write a bit.
To comment on the story/suggest something that could happen but not written out: Do not reply to any specific person.
(Btw if it turns out good I will try and get it published, but we will all get credit, don't worry)
It can be about... an ordinary school where everyone is supernatural, but everyone keeps it a secret (apart from occasional telling it to your best friend) so no one knows that everyone is :P So perhaps we could have it going to different people's point of view at times. (At which case please state that it has changed POV)
To continue the story: Reply to the last person to write a bit.
To comment on the story/suggest something that could happen but not written out: Do not reply to any specific person.
(Btw if it turns out good I will try and get it published, but we will all get credit, don't worry)
It can be about... an ordinary school where everyone is supernatural, but everyone keeps it a secret (apart from occasional telling it to your best friend) so no one knows that everyone is :P So perhaps we could have it going to different people's point of view at times. (At which case please state that it has changed POV)
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Permalink Reply by Ina Divine on -
*No Antony is Simons brother (same father), Simon and Sammy are too ( same mother) . Reena is not a sister to anyone , she's Antonys on and off girlfriend... Lila Thorn can be the long lost sister... *
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Permalink Reply by Ina Divine on
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* OK, I agree.*
POV Change Reena
I wasn’t yellues. Not even when I saw Antony kissing that screwed up angel. No , he needs to make her believe that she found what she had been searching for. Then when she does believe they will take them. It’s because the power. Nothing else. He wants power.
" Hey, you must be Reena , I'm Kerry." The little one set by my side.
"Yeah, welcome to the coven. " I put on a fake smile. This will be hard .
" Thanks. Can I ask you something ? " I heard her , but I was watching Antony and Simon fighting whit their minds. she didn't catch it.
" What? "
" Do you have some clothes I could borrow?"
she could ask about everything and I would just answer her with few words, but clothes...
" You asked the right person. " I took her to my new closet. I looked at her white dress.
" Do you always dress like that? Not that it's bad but you could really add something beside white. "
" I think you're right." She really was getting rid of her angelic side.
" Try this." I gave her an short blood red dress and she took it without asking.
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Permalink Reply by Mel on -
what do you mean they were fighting with there mind? there both telephatic?
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Permalink Reply by Ina Divine on
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* dunno , you know , like they bought like the same girl and they are piercing each others mind,... really dunno*
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Permalink Reply by Mel on
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POV Simon
“What are you doing to Kerry?” I asked Anthony through my mind. We were both telephatic, a power we had gratefully stolen, so noone noticed we were fighting except for Reena.
“Nothing. But she needs to join our coven.” He replied with a smirk.
“I know that! Why were you kissing her?” I asked, furious.
“She started kissing me!” I didn’t understand. Why was Kerry wanting to kiss Anthony? I looked over to her, she was trying on a dress that Reena had lent her. She looked beautiful in it.
“Now forget our differences! We need to get her to accept us and join our coven.” He almost shouted at me, which caused me to have a mild headache.
“It doesn’t look like it will be difficult.” I replied with a chuckle.
POV Kerry
“Thanks Reena.” I said, she was being sweet to me. I liked this coven they weren’t soulless like Sammy had said.
“Anytime. It looks better than the white dress you had on before.” She was right. I was getting bored of my white dress. I looked over at Anthony and Simon, they seemed deep in thoughts.
** Can someone write about the others(Keisha, Matt...) coz I don't know what to write!! **
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Permalink Reply by Ina Divine on
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*Ok, lol , Matty her it goes...*
POV Change Matt
Everything was silent in the house after Sammys outbreak . Keisha seemed strangely guilty and I didn't know what to say.
" Keish , You ..." Keishas eyes were watering ...
" In a way I was happy cause she left and now ... I feel like the worst, ..."
I embraced her , she was so breakable and everyone knew that, and everyone had hurt her and still she stayed on her feet... She is breakable but strong.
" Keisha do you want to go out with me, ... I mean on our first date ? " That should get her thoughts off of the bad things.
" Our first date." She smiled " But you know I don't kiss on my first date."
"I'll take it.." We bought laughed.
* Now you could write about their date... :) *
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Permalink Reply by Pure♥The smart cookie♥ on -
POV Change Keisha
It was so carefree--it took my mind off of all that was happening.
We had left everyone at the house, no one had asked us where we were going, or when or if we’d be back, but I seen a slight shift in Kyle’s attention . He never said anything either though. I wish they had....
Our foot steps made no sound as we walked across the grass of the deserted park, which looked more like a forest. It was mid day, the sun was high in the sky, but the thick foliage kept the park in cased in heathered shadows, leaving a mystical feel to it all. The entire time we had walked, my hand in Matt’s, we hadn’t spoken much, I was too enthralled in the moment, my heart was singing the soft and longing sound of love. I was too in love.
Matt spoke as we sat on an aged bench., in a little clearing surrounded by the forest.
“Spooky huh,” he joked.
I looked at him. “What do you mean?”
“This park, its kind of creepy.” I seen him looking around at the dark forest around us.
“I think it’s kind of... magical.” I smiled, trying to lighten the mood of it all. I could tell Matt wasn’t as distracted as I was; he was still thinking about the other situations.
He smiled back, but it didn’t touch his eyes. So I decided I’d break my rule.
I touched his cheek lightly and leaned in, placing my lips on his and kissed him. I could tell this caught his attention and he kissed me back. He pulled me closer, wrapping his arms around my waist. The kiss was long and sweet; it made my head spin a little.
I pulled back a bit, just enough to look into his eyes.
“I love you.” It was way more than true. It was like he was my soul mate. I no longer loved Dave...he was behind me, he had Sammy now. All my mind was screaming as Matt kissed me again was that he was mine. No one else was, only him. And I was his.
I kissed him back, lost in a trance like state where only the two of us were. Not even the sudden pain of my body hitting the ground fully woke me from my thoughts. It was only Matt screaming my name and the sudden darkness that I was left in that broke it.
POV Changed Kyle
“They’ve been gone for a while...” I broke into the silence that seemed to hang over the house still. I was staring out the window at the darkening sky. I turned around when no one said anything.
“Guy’s, I think something’s wrong....I can sense it.” They all looked up at me from their own quiet thought.
“They have been gone for a long time.” Aliah spoke aloud, there was a concerned tone to her voice. “Does anyone know where they went?” She looked around the living room at everyone.
No one spoke.
“Damn it,” I muttered. Than said aloud “We need to find them, I can sense Keisha is in distress.” I was worried. Matt had taken Keisha somewhere and I didn’t even bother asking where. Now she could be in danger and it’s my fault that I can’t find her.
“Kyle,” Sammy place a pale hand on my shoulder. “It’s okay we’ll find them.” There was confidence in her smile. She looked over at Dave who was sitting on the couch where they had been cuddling. “Dave lets go find a sent.”
(okays soooo i could have written more but I wouldnt have been able to stop myself, lol..but im really in the mood to write....ummm...i was thinking that maybe simons coven got them or something and everyone has to try to save them...*im so mean to the characters, lol...i ruined the date*)
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Permalink Reply by Lillith Rose Amaranthus ♥ on -
POV Matt
Anyone who see's Keisha on the ground and wasn't there when she fell would be convinced she was having a vision, but I was there. One moment in her soft embrace, kissing her trembling lips and the next feeling her warm body just collapse, blood everywhere. Screaming her name, and having no reply, just nothing.
I looked around, trying to find out who did this, but not wanting to leave Keisha, especially in this state. Her breathing was faint, very faint. I saw a movement in the trees, then the creature came forward. She was in a blood red dress, with three others following her, 2 guys and a girl. Kerry was smiling. Keisha stopped breathing.
POV Kerry
I finally killed that stupid psychic, that bloody human trying to join our supernatural world; she didn't belong with vampires, ghosts, and witches. No, she was just human, the human who over and over again tried to take my happiness.
“Thank God, I’ve finally killed that bitch, every time she ruined my life, I was forced to be heavenly and forgive her, after all that was my nature, but I am something new now,”
“Kerry, why did you kill her,” Matt said as a tear trickled down his face.
“Because, she must die, just like I did.”
“But you’re alive”
“Not fully, not on inside, it feels like something is actually missing.”
“Probably your soul,” He muttered under his breath, but heard him. I ran forward, sharp pocket knife to his throat.
“Say that again spirit.”
POV Keisha
The darkness was crushing me, then I saw a light, I felt… Happy.
There was a cloaked figure in front of me, he started to speak.
“You are not ready to die,” In moments I saw the light pulling away from me, the pain returning. I gasped for air, and opened my eyes. Everyone one was here, Kyle was healing me, Matt was holding my hand.
“It’s okay Keisha, it will all be okay,” Matt said as he stroked my cheek.
“You’re lucky Sammy and Dave found you, otherwise I might not have been able to save you,” Kyle said, he looked weaker from all the healing, but was happy. “And you are lucky that Kerry and the rest of the coven decided to leave, otherwise we wouldn’t be here either.”
Matt whispered into my ear, “Kerry’s has turned into a demon, but don’t worry. I love you more than anything else.” When he said that every part of my body knew it was true.
*Sorry its so long, couldn't stop*
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Permalink Reply by Aisling on -
*OMG You Guys! I haven't been able to reply in God knows how long due to the house being redecorated :/ and the computer wasn't hooked up for several days and then the computer's facing into the room so anyone that walks past can see it and my family don't know about this site or anything and blah de blah blah blah... anyway! it's REALLY immensely awesome!!! I love Simon! I know he's a bad guy but I love him! I don't want him to be bad =[ (then again I wish Draco malfoy wasn't... :/) Anyway... only took me an hour and a half to read that! And did anyone else notice how before this page Kyle and Matt hadn't had a POV for about 5 pages? lol And poor Ina when she was the only one writing! (It was Ina right? o.o It was 4 pages ago lol... the first page I was ready over an hour ago xD)*
POV Simon:
"Anthony sometimes I bloody hate you." I told him telepathically.
"I ALWAYS fucking hate you." Anthony replied.
"WHY did you have to do that with her? I know she has to die and I don't care... but I could have enjoyed her while she lasted! And I'm pretty sure Reena's not to happy about it either..." I tried desperately.
"Because I wanted to. I felt like it."
"You ALWAYS do it though! Everytime I find a girl you take her away from me!"
"Yeah! 'Cos you leave them while they're unconcious!" He laughed, quite literally mentally. "You're too rough on them!"
"Some girls like it that way!" I tried to defend myself.
"Some girls like their genitals intact as well!"
"Shut up!" I used a telepathic ability that only I possess to trick his brain into thinking that he was in pain.
"I bloody hate you!" He screamed at me.
*I know it's short but I was meant to be in bed about an hour and a half ago... I should be able to write again on Thursday latest! Mwah! And btw... POV change plox!*
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Permalink Reply by Ina Divine on
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* Yeah , it was me, :) . And yeah I know what you mean about Simon, hell I loved Sammy in the beginning when you all wanted her to be evil , lol, I'll write soon , now I don't really know what to write ...*
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