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Permalink Reply by Blood Angel on September 8, 2009 at 7:31pm

*wow. Hey sorry I haen't written anything lately, but I love where the story is going. I have no idea what to write atm, though...*

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POV Change (Matt):

"Come on!" Keisha whispered in my ear. "Follow our lead!"

I looked at her, puzzled.

She grabbed my hand and started pulling me along.
We were moving towards the bench and then suddenly we stopped and started moving round in a sort of oval-circle-shape thing... What on EARTH was she doing?

I then noticed that the others were doing the same, some going the other way. We were creating a circle... but why?

I have never been so confused in my life. I thought that everyone was going mad! But then I looked at Keisha and she turned back to me and smiled. I smield back instantly.

Keisha knows what she's doing. It's fine...

We ended up in a smallish circle. Keisha let go of my hand and gestured for me to go along a bit, so that I was in the middle of the gap between Keisha and Sammy.

Kyle was, of course, next to Keisha and Dave next to Sammy.

"What the...?" A new female voice boomed everywhere.

The other voices were still fighting.

"Guys! Guys!" She yelled.

"I'm a girl, you bitch!" Kerry retorted.

"GUYS!" The unknown voice shouted again.

"I'M A FUCKING GIRL YOU WHORE!" Kerry screeched at her.

"STOP FIGHTING!" The unknown voice somehow managed to screech louder than Kerry, it sounded nicer though. Kerry's voice had sounded cracked and broken and horrible...

POV Change (Aliah):

It was a good thing that Matt trusted Keisha enough to go along with it all! I had thought when I saw him follow her, no matter how confused he got.

As I watched them creating the circle, making sure that they didn't bump into anyone (which none of them even came close to doing) I found myself thinking, yet again, how odd it was that none of my spells had gone wrong so far, since this entire quest had begun in fact!

Perhaps... no... surely it's not down to destiny...? It could be though...

If I hadn't known the super-hearing spell I wouldn't have even bothered to follow Sammy and Dave... and if I hadn't been able to do the booming spell I probably wouldn't have bothered with the quest at all, especially if I hadn't known the invisibility one! And if I hadn't known the anti-spell protection spell then they probably would have found me too! And--

Wait! The circle is complete!

God, that sounds cliche!

POV Change (Anthony):

Shit! How the fuck had they managed to find out where we were?

"The spells are still working aren't they?" I asked Simon telepathically.

"Of course!" He replied indignantly.

"Then how do they know that we're here?" I yelled back at him, all still telepathically, of course.

"How the fuck am I supposed to know?" Simon sounded just as confused and pissed off as I was.

"They're YOUR spells!" I yelled back.

"GUYS! Stop it this instant!" (I've forgotton the girl's name but please enter it here in your minds when reading this) yelled at us, still telepathically.

We both shut up, but continued loathing each other.

POV Change (Aliah):

I noticed the loathing that the brothers were feeling. They were annoyed at how they got circled, I could tell.

I had to stop myself from jumping up and down in excitement.

I saw their spell waver as their loathing grew stronger until eventually they brought it down by themselves.

POV Change (Matt):

"Oh my God!" I jumped, shocked as I saw the bad guys materialise right in front of my very eyes!

"What the fu...?" I started as I turned to Keisha, expecting her to be just as surprised as me when I saw her smiling sympathetically and (mostly) mischeiviously at me.

I shook my head, trying to focus on the fact that we were in danger as opposed to the fact that somehow everyone else already knew what I was only just finding out.

POV Change (Aliah):

Matt quickly recovered from his surprise, which was defiantly a plus.

There weren't many words exchanged between the two groups of enemies.

"Alright skank patrol." Kerry smiled. "We'll fight."

Everybody seemed to have picked someone to fight almost instantly.

We had a slight upper hand, even from their point of view as there were five of us out there but only four of them.

I could tell by the look on their faces that they picked who they were up against via telepathy. Not that it really mattered.

POV Change (Kerry):

"I'll take Dave." I told the coven happily. "He won't want to hurt me as much as he would any of you guys. Besides, it'll be fun." I laughed my new laugh.

"I'll take Sammy. You two would see her as a sister still. Or are more likely to at least." (girl's name) said.

"That twin girl." Simon gestured to Keisha telepathically.

"Her twin'll probably go with her, so I'll take the one that was clueless." Anthony refered to Matt.

"Let's go." I said and we immediatly started out towards our opponents.

I started running towards Dave, laughing with glee.

Then Sammy jumped in front of me and snarled like a beast.

I laughed. "Bitch, you snarl like a fucking beast! You little whore!" I laughed again, after deciding to roll with it.

I went to punch her, still enjoying the thrill of the new me against all those bitches. She dodged then grabbed my wrist as it flew past her and tried to swing me over her.

I was surprised, but still managed to use my angel powers to push her away. My powers felt more red than white now, but I only noted it slightly to myself, getting wrapped up in the fun of things too much.

POV Change (Keisha):

I saw that Simon had picked me. I laughed slightly. I don't see how it was funny really, but I had that sort of dream feeling, so I knew that we were probably going to win as it was probably a dream...

He was running up to me, looking determined and yet not all togetehr THERE. I merely stood there, looking at him before waiting until the last moment to step aside and hold out my foot. He didn't manage to break in time and so fell over. I laughed. Such a basic manoveur and he fell for it!

POV Change (Kyle):

I noticed that no one was coming for ME. They probably assumed that I'd go with my sister. Like I was going to do that! I knew that she could take care of herself easily and that I'd know if she needed help. Matt on the otehr hand seemed to only have spiritism as an ability, which is great... but not for fighting.

I ran over to Matt, skipping round people. I ran straight up to Anthony, who was obviously the one going for Matt. I stopped beside him and simply stuck out my fist. He fell over instantly.

I knew that Keisha would have laughed at such a thing, but I was slightly more serious than my sister.

Matt high-fived me.

POV Change (Dave):

I was glad that Sammy had taken on Kerry, no way would I have managed to do that!

I ended up with the female of the coven. Great... someone who will either be really weak or amazingly strong... probably.

She was zig-zagging towards me, so that I wouldn't know which side to go for. Then she tried to strike me with her fist.

I easily pushed her arm aside. I leg-sweeped her but she jumped over my legs. She tried to hit me while I was down near the ground, but she missed, just.

I got back up whilst she was recovering. She tried to knee me in the balls. But I managed to catche her leg and twist it round, so that she fell straight into the mud. She turned back round on her back, an angry look on her face. She kicked up and managed to catch me behind my knee, having trying to get me in the balls again. She pulled me down with her.

POV Change (Aliah):

I know I'm supposed to be the guide, so I'm probably supposed to be here... but for a moment I sooo wanted to be up there with them!

I watched how Kyle instantly went with Matt, which made a lot of sense. That means that Kyle and Keisha will know what's going on with each other, including Matt in that and Sammy and Dave would probably have gone together...

I looked over and found that that was not the case. Sammy was fighting Kerry, who had probably gone for Dave. And Dave was fighting the female of the coven. I noticed how she kept on going for his balls. She clearly thought that that was her biggest advantage.

"Dave!" I telepathically yelled to him. "Being hit in the breasts is just as painful as the balls! She probably doesn't know that!"

I saw him smile and rugby tackle her, getting them even more covered in mud. He smushed against her with his back. She groaned. Then he stood up, cleverly making it so that he put his weight on her stomach, so that it was low enough to reach with his feet from where he was lying and still would hurt her enough to distract her from trying to bring him back down again. then he stood on her breasts, a foot on each, slamming down hard via jumping and keeping all of his weight on her.

She screamed so loudly that I'm surprised that no one else turned around to see what was going on.

I turned away from the pair and focused on Kyle, Matt and Anthony.

Kyle was controlling some fire to make it attack Anthony. While he was distracting by said fire Kyle gave Matt a lift so that Matt then jumped onto Anthony's back and started to throttle him from his own back. After a moment of mere shock Anthony slammed down onto his back, crushing Matt behind him. Kyle then slammed a gret big fireball into Anthony's face. He screeched and rolled off of Matt immediatly. I had a feeling that they wouldn't need my help at all.

I turned to Keisha and Simon. Keisha seemed to be laughing and giggling as she hit and kicked - and even once headbutted - him. He seemed rather bored and as fi he wasn't really thinking about what was going on, as if in a daze or daydream. Clearly Keisha didn't need my help - yet at least.

I turned to Sammy and Kerry and saw that Kerry was floating in the air, clearly using her angelic powers. She started to spin and I saw that she was creating a mini-hurricane.

I didn't know she could do that! It must be to do with her new demonic being! Surely!

sammy was growling and snarling below, but Kerry was too high up for her to reach, no matter how much she kept on jumping.

I looked around, forgetting that it was my own garden and that I knew everything in it.

I saw the wheelie bins and instantly summoned my telekinetic powers.

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Permalink Reply by Banana Babe XD on September 9, 2009 at 8:48pm

I made the bins levitate a few inches off the ground for a second, testing if I could really life something as heavy but when I was convinced I sent them hurling with all my strenght in Kerry's direction. The bins hit her mid-spin and she fell on the ground with a thud, leaving the half-created mini-tornado loose. It spun like it was a man caught on fire and thankfully went the opposite direction of my house, crossing paths with anthony and lifting him up in the air. I heard Reena scream at Anthony but I couldn't make out the words.
I felt weak for a minute, I hadn't trained as much as I should have for this and using so much of my powers in the last few days made me weak, I just hadn't realised it before now that I was actually needed.
I had to cast a spell, the tornado was still making Anthony spin but in a few moments it might destroy my house.

*I wish I could write more but I have to go*

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Permalink Reply by Aisling on September 9, 2009 at 9:10pm

*That's okay. xD Awesomeness btw!!! (I'm also slightly hyper so... that's why the faces and "!"s etc. ...*

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Permalink Reply by annixandra lightwing on September 10, 2009 at 11:21am

*aisling you and banana babe rock the story rocks every body working on the story rocks i cant wait to see were its taken its coming along really well:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D if u cant tell im hyper active and i had sugar its 3:21 am and im wide awake (for now) loving the story so far*

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Permalink Reply by Banana Babe XD on September 10, 2009 at 12:53pm

*okay something just occured to me. If this is really the big scene finally of the book (and im not sure if it is) but if it is we need a big BAM that would really spice it up but personally I think that the evil vamps should give something like a secret that could defeat them away but they don't realise it at that moment they only realise it in a future bug battle when they're all about to be killed or whatever and yayyyy save the world. I'm thinkin that maybe the next time they'd meet there'd b lila thorn with them and she could have some sort of mega power that she suddenly developed. I dont know but maybe this is the final battle so I'm probably just rambling... *

Permalink Reply by Aisling on September 10, 2009 at 4:39pm

*OMG! I know! (I think) How about Lila suddenly appears out of nowhere and it turns out that she's a secret member of the coven...? Then it evens up the odds and Matt will have to fight someone on his own.*

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Permalink Reply by Banana Babe XD on September 10, 2009 at 4:41pm

*OMG you're so right!! that way this would be the final battle and we wouldn't have to stay making it go on and on and on and on..... get the point? haha anyways I'm gonna work on it right now.*

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Permalink Reply by Aisling on September 10, 2009 at 4:46pm

*Okay. Also I was gunna give Matt another power: It's that he cannot be HARMED by powers... so liek Kyle can warm him up using fire but he can't burn him using it and Kyle can heal him and stuff like that, k?

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Permalink Reply by Banana Babe XD on September 10, 2009 at 4:48pm

*wh if instead of giving Matt another power we add to Kyle's that he can choose whether or not to harm someone when heating them up. Ex: Matt can be heated up without being harmed and at the same time no one would be able to touch him physically without being burned? Tell me if u prefer urs*

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Permalink Reply by Aisling on September 10, 2009 at 4:55pm

*I like the Kyle thing as well as it is realistic; but I want the Matt thing for several reasons:
a) Matt is kind of useless on his own at the moment because he can't do any magical fighting so if he couldn't have magic used on him in a harmful way then they could fighting physcially and so he'd actually have a chance of winning...
b) Everyone else has more than one (I think... :S I loose count) or they're not human.

And there were other reasons but I forgot, I was going to mention Matt's powers when being Aliah last night, but I forgot, because of course Matt doesn't know it yet because he didn't know anyone else with magical abilities before the book.*

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Permalink Reply by Banana Babe XD on September 10, 2009 at 4:56pm

*ur right.*

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