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Writing a story together
Anyone will be allowed to write any amount of it as you like, just do not dominate the story.
To continue the story: Reply to the last person to write a bit.
To comment on the story/suggest something that could happen but not written out: Do not reply to any specific person.
(Btw if it turns out good I will try and get it published, but we will all get credit, don't worry)
It can be about... an ordinary school where everyone is supernatural, but everyone keeps it a secret (apart from occasional telling it to your best friend) so no one knows that everyone is :P So perhaps we could have it going to different people's point of view at times. (At which case please state that it has changed POV)
To continue the story: Reply to the last person to write a bit.
To comment on the story/suggest something that could happen but not written out: Do not reply to any specific person.
(Btw if it turns out good I will try and get it published, but we will all get credit, don't worry)
It can be about... an ordinary school where everyone is supernatural, but everyone keeps it a secret (apart from occasional telling it to your best friend) so no one knows that everyone is :P So perhaps we could have it going to different people's point of view at times. (At which case please state that it has changed POV)
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Permalink Reply by annixandra lightwing on -
*ok cool and ya we were talking about killing her off and ais and banana both agreed that its a good idea banana was the one that suggested killing her off it makes fewer caricatures and it also makes things a lil more interesting at the same time**if you want any ideas for the stor ask*
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Permalink Reply by Aisling on -
*Yh. But remember that Kyle's partner is Aliah and as Aliah's the guide she doesn't actually fight - that's the whole she doesn't fight thing...*
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Permalink Reply by Banana Babe XD on -
*but aliah can actually fight if she wants u. she just thought it wud be better coz like this in the final batttle they arent actuallly thinking about it so they dnt know about aliah. so they have the element of surprise. i uv all of ur ideas annixandra!!!! *
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Permalink Reply by Mel on -
** Can lila thorn be there secret weopen? ** ** annixandra i left you aa message. **
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Permalink Reply by Banana Babe XD on
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*aha but i dnt think that she should do anything in this one so shell still be a secret. i dnt know maybe we shouldnt mention her true identitty yet...?*
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Permalink Reply by Aisling on
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*Yh... but the whole point about her not fighting is the fact that she's not actually part of the quest... she's just the guide. I know that she CAN fight but... it's just that they'll work out that the reason why she wasn't fighting was because she was the guide, but perhaps they could figure out that it only matters when they're finding out what the quest is exactly...*
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Permalink Reply by Mel on
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POV Sammy
Who was the stranger approaching us?
“Lila Thorn.” I heard Keisha say under her breath. Who was Lila Thorn?
“What are you doing here?” Kerry snarled.
“Oh didn’t your new coven tell you? I’m there secret weapon.” Lila said with a chuckle.
“We had a secret weapon? And no one mentioned her.” Kerry sounded abit angry.
POV Lila
They all looked surprised, except Reena, Simon and Anthony; they just looked bored.
POV Simon
“Come on let’s continue the fight.” I told Anthony telepathically.
“Simon you take Sammy, I’ll take Matt.” Anthony replied, telepathically, with a smirk. He was probably testing me, trying to see if I would fight my own flesh and blood. I had no choice but to obey. I ran onto Sammy, but like when we were young, she was faster than me and so she moved out of the way.
“What are you doing?” Sammy asked confusing.
“Fighting you.”
“Why?”
“Because, you’re my enemy now Sammy.”
“What are you talking about? You’re my brother.”
“You should have thought about that before you became my enemy and join them instead of us.” I was getting angry at Sammy for making things difficult. I didn’t want to hurt her, let alone kill her but I had no choice. I saw her phase for a bit but she didn’t back out.
“Oh so that’s what you really wanted me to become? I soulless creature like you.”
Her words stung.
“No Sammy, I wanted us to be a family again.”
“We can never be a family. I will never be a family with Anthony or Reena.” I saw fire in her eyes. We had stopped fighting by now, we were shouting at each other; but with the fighting going on no one was hearing us.
POV Alaih
Everyone was fighting except for Lila, Simon and Sammy. Lila was just looking at everyone, amused. Clearly waiting to make her move. Simon and Sammy were arguring, they should leave there family problems behind and continue the battle.
“Sammy what are you doing? Continue!” I shouted at her from my mind.
I saw her phase abit but then she continued shouting at Simon. She wasn’t going to pay any attention to me.
POV Sammy
“Sammy you don’t get it. How can you accept me but not Anthony and Reena?”
“You’re not like them.”
“I am! I joined there coven.”
“But you have some good in you. I know you do. If you didn’t I would be dead by now.” I retorted.
**I don't know how to write Reena's death scene sorry**
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Permalink Reply by Banana Babe XD on
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*i love it!*
He stared at me for as moment. "You're wrong, it's too late for me. Anthony's taken everything I want. Everything except you... and the way things are going you're goin to be dead soon so why should I even care?" He looked sad and I saw him look at Kerry longingly. What's going on with them? He's obviously inlove with her but she seems so oblivious...
"you're inlove with her aren't you?"
"It doesn't matter."
"Yes it does!" How could he not see it!
" Just let it go Sammy!"
*ill continue this tomorrow if u dnt mind*
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Permalink Reply by Banana Babe XD on
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*sry if i have spelling mistakes but long story short I dont have microsoft word on my computer and i type rlly fast so i usually do a lot of typos. sry to keep u waiting but yesterday my mum wanted me to get off the laptop but i rllyy wanted to continue it so here it goes*
"I don't want to!" I told him
"Stop being such a stubborn little brat!" He screamed fiercely and tried to punch me but i side stepped easily. He was getting mad.
"Why would you let her be with that animal?"
"You don't know what you're talking about!" He snapped s he slaped me across the face. "You stupid, stupid, stupid little girl! You're ignorant and selfish! You don't understand anything!" He screamed again as he lunged for me, again and again. I had no choice but to fight back.
I grabbed him from the back and slammed him against the wall. "Love is the only things that keep any shred of humanity in us. If you let her go, it's like surrendering your soul... or whatever's left of it!" I told him whilst I pinned him down. He stopped strugling for a moment and I knew that he was looking at Kerry. He still managed to see the good that she once had but maybe that was enough.
*I would write mor ebut i dnt know how to do the killing scene coz it hass to b kind of big seeing as ses a vamp.*
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Permalink Reply by annixandra lightwing on
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* well the only thing i can think of is being impaled by the wooden handle of a piece of gardening equipment like the wooden handle to a rake or a shovel or something like that like have one of the bad guys throw it at her opponent just as it almost hits the good gut the good guy steps out of the way and she gets impaled through the heart with it kind of like a steak but muck duller still wooden but much duller but if a vampire is throwing it with all there strength then it being dull wouldn't be a problem going through her chest and it would kill her you could have Anthony throw it trying to save her because she was getting beaten and he was trying to help and instead he kills her it would be a random way to die it would be extrema it would be sudden and it would be totally cool just a though at least it shorter than my other random thoughts lol :) *
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