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Writing a story together

Anyone will be allowed to write any amount of it as you like, just do not dominate the story.

To continue the story: Reply to the last person to write a bit.
To comment on the story/suggest something that could happen but not written out: Do not reply to any specific person.

(Btw if it turns out good I will try and get it published, but we will all get credit, don't worry)

It can be about... an ordinary school where everyone is supernatural, but everyone keeps it a secret (apart from occasional telling it to your best friend) so no one knows that everyone is :P So perhaps we could have it going to different people's point of view at times. (At which case please state that it has changed POV)

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Permalink Reply by Aisling on September 12, 2009 at 10:25pm: *Sorry... pretty damn long...*

Permalink Reply by annixandra lightwing on September 13, 2009 at 4:17am: * i like it that way it sounds good and him being able to see her in the end if that part even though shes dead adds another twist to the story that could go many places i like the way u have that so who else likes it and wants to keep it that way?*; ▶ Reply to This

Permalink Reply by Mel on September 14, 2009 at 9:04pm: **Hey I like it but some one should tell Simon and Kerry something they cant just join them without another thought I mean they were evil after all**; ▶ Reply to This

Permalink Reply by Aisling on September 14, 2009 at 9:26pm: *Someone'll probably say soemthign about them; it's just that they're all in shock from Reena's death so that they're barely even speaking at all.*; ▶ Reply to This

Permalink Reply by annixandra lightwing on September 14, 2009 at 11:06pm: *true there is a small gap between were the story last ended and the new part so i would go back and start from there and go from there and make them mesh so its just 1 continues story line and there is no gap sit i cant really write so i will leave that to one of the rest of you im spending most of my time working on stuff for the pageant im entering into and working on getting my husband to be out of jail which is oh so much fun but i would go to hell and back for my man so im doing it i have so many things i have to be doing im running around like a chicken with my head cut off and im going crazy or rather more crazy as i already consider my self as crazy*; ▶ Reply to This

Permalink Reply by Aisling on September 15, 2009 at 4:58pm: *A gap? What do you mean exactly?*; ▶ Reply to This

Permalink Reply by Aisling on September 15, 2009 at 5:25pm: *Btw... I also thought that perhaps they could bring Reena back to life by replacing the blood that she lost, Kyle heal up the wound and then do the back her heart beat again and make her breath again thing while she goes inside her body... just an idea... doesn't have to happen*; ▶ Reply to This

Permalink Reply by annixandra lightwing on September 17, 2009 at 3:07am: *i dont remember i had seen a gap but i cant find it there now it looks fine to me now i have been doing a doesn't things at once haven't even looked at chapter 3 for mel's book in a few days like i was asked to but i have so many things im doing im trying to stay caught up on it all and certain things im falling behind but i don't remember were i had seen the gap so idk what i meant by a gap i remember that the parts of the story here didn't fit exactly with the part after but i cant find it now so oh well it may be because i have been so drugged up on things to make me better before i have been sick and have just over a week to get better for my pageant that i saw it been on all sorts of meds but it looks fine now so :) never mind about what i said as for reena i think she should have to help them some to actually get into heaven that she did enough good at one time that its counteracting the bad she did and she has to do more good to get into heaven and it has to be helping them since the last bad she did was agents them but that she shouldn't come back shes dead leave her dead but as a ghostly helper and make it so Matt isn't the only one who can see her have kyle be able to see her as he has gone with Matt into the ghost form have it be something he picked up from that experience have reena standing in the kitchen or something and have kyle walk in there and walk right back out and ask the rest of the group how she was brought back they all go in there and dont see her and ask what he was talking about have kyle point to somewhere in the kitchen like looking out the window and say what you cant see her shes right there and have all but matt think he is full of it and losing it because of seeing a death and kyle can mumble under his breath i thought for shure it want a ghose this time she looks so solid like she used to but have matt hear him and be like what did u just say u mean u have seen others and i dont mean me and have kyle answer yes i have seen others and no not just you in that form have him tell him were he sees reena and what look she is saying or something like that and matt will know hes actually seeing and hearing her say matt will hear and see it to and he will be able to tell them all that kyle is not crazy that they both see her and kyles sis wont think matt crazy any more as her brother can see reena as well and she trusts her bro and mat both quite a bit :) just some thoughts*; ▶ Reply to This

Permalink Reply by Banana Babe XD on September 15, 2009 at 8:21pm: *I think its kind of wierd that the gd guys are crying over the evil ones. I think reena should just be evil. she has sum gd but i think she should remain evil. maybe she uses them to come bk to life and then goes back or else she could guys be dead...*

POV Matt

she kept on looking at me but i didnt know if i could hear her talk yet. she was still staring at me until I couldn't take it anymore!
"Stop it!" I yelled, Keisha obviously cou;ldn't see her. She looked at me like I was crazy... maybe I was.
"Oh My God!" she yelled at me. "I'm not dead! All that and I'm not in heaven... or hell at least!" She continued" "You must be kidding me!" she yelled to an imaginary god
"God, stop screaming! you're making my ears bleed"
Keisha still didn't believe me I guessed from the way she was looking at me.
"Find a way to make this stop!" She ordered.; ▶ Reply to This

Permalink Reply by Aisling on September 15, 2009 at 8:48pm: *They're crying because of how sad the moment is:- remember that they're all kids, and they've never seen anyone die before. Besides; they all think that it's their fault don't they?

And Reena could perhaps do some stuff while she's a spirit: but not remember when she becomes alive again. I like the idea of her using them: I like her being evil (not as much as I like Kerry being evil though... [btw... how about Kerry doesn't kill people at night but she threatens and blackmails and steals? And stuff...]) She's just slightly good as a spirit because she realised stuff in her death, but when she's alive again she could forget her death because to her body's mind it never happened.*; ▶ Reply to This

Permalink Reply by Banana Babe XD on September 16, 2009 at 10:45pm: *yh i like that idea.*; ▶ Reply to This

Permalink Reply by Aisling on September 17, 2009 at 9:41pm: *But who could work out WHY she forgot her death...? Hmm... -thinky face-*; ▶ Reply to This