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Writing a story together
Anyone will be allowed to write any amount of it as you like, just do not dominate the story.
To continue the story: Reply to the last person to write a bit.
To comment on the story/suggest something that could happen but not written out: Do not reply to any specific person.
(Btw if it turns out good I will try and get it published, but we will all get credit, don't worry)
It can be about... an ordinary school where everyone is supernatural, but everyone keeps it a secret (apart from occasional telling it to your best friend) so no one knows that everyone is :P So perhaps we could have it going to different people's point of view at times. (At which case please state that it has changed POV)
To continue the story: Reply to the last person to write a bit.
To comment on the story/suggest something that could happen but not written out: Do not reply to any specific person.
(Btw if it turns out good I will try and get it published, but we will all get credit, don't worry)
It can be about... an ordinary school where everyone is supernatural, but everyone keeps it a secret (apart from occasional telling it to your best friend) so no one knows that everyone is :P So perhaps we could have it going to different people's point of view at times. (At which case please state that it has changed POV)
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Permalink Reply by annixandra lightwing on -
*sounds good to me and i think at one point we had said that's how kyle got to be able to see the ghosts that way it wasn't only Matt who was able to see Reena and i like the idea about Simon, Anthony and Keisha saving Simon.*
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Permalink Reply by Lillith Rose Amaranthus ♥ on -
*Kyle could be able to see the dead because he is a healer, and is really living side by side with death, you know, saving keisha all the time*
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Permalink Reply by annixandra lightwing on
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*that could be to but why would he be seeing them now not always having been seeing them we need to explain why hes seeing them now it has to do with something that's been going on it could have to do with the fact she keeps almost dying but then she should have an experience were she dies and they have to put her back in her body because its not her time and he sees her and other ghosts something like that but i think it would be easiest to have it because the 2 guys combined there powers it just makes things less complicates but im not really writing im just making suggestions and putting in my 2 cents :) *
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Permalink Reply by Ina Divine on -
*okay I'll reply *
(still Sammy)
The phone rang and suddenly I wasn't in the center of attention. I thank God for it.
"I'll get it." Keisha who was at the door said . "or if you want , you get it, I mean it's still your house" She looked at Aliah.
" You get it " Aliah answered .
POV change Keisha
The phone rang once more before I answered .
" Hello " I said.
" Is mister Daniel Roothkins Smith there? " A strong voice asked.
"Please wait a moment ."
I put my hand over the phone . " Dave I think it's for you. "
He took the phone.
" Yes? " Dave said and looked at me. " The line is dead. Who was it? "
" Someone asked for Daniel Roothkins Smith . "
" Did you say Roothkins ? " Dave looked serious .
"Yes." I said a little scared. " Why?"
* It's Daves relative , yeah , the one you said will show up. . So let's do this like this, This relative ( werewolf ) attacks Keisha when Sammy was planing to go instead of Simon , so her plans are screwed up, and Simon is the one who goes. Kerry can save Keisha. and Keisha can save Simon . Just one thing , why does this werewolf attack Keisha? Can it be some werewolf thing that they know who imprinted on who and thinks that is the way to get Dave . So , Is anyone going to write ??????????? Please ............ "
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Permalink Reply by annixandra lightwing on
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* i like the reason for him attacking her to be because of the imprint thinking that's who Dave is with ( most people don't imprint then leave a girl ) so he could think that's who Dave is with and Sammy could be fighting with Simon about him going back see that Keisha is getting attacked and run to save her Simon could run and go back to the bad guys which ruins Sammy's plan and Kerry could save Keisha before Sammy could get even half way from were her and Simon were fighting to Keisha and when Kerry saves Keisha she could turn back to fight with Simon again and he could be gone no where to be found (having gone back to the bad side for now) and then once Simon gets in trouble Keisha can save him my big question is is the relative good or bad and depending on the side why is he attacking Dave and them whats the motive?*
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Permalink Reply by Mel on -
**how about the werewolf is dave's brother and they hate each other so the werewolf sees keisha with dave and so he attacks keisha because he knows she is important to Dave.and when keisha gets in danger dave goes to save her with sammy and dave realizes he's his brother so they have a one on one fight. the werewolf would be bad.** ** i will write a piece tomorrow after i get my laptop**
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Permalink Reply by Mel on
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"Because the only people that know about that name are my family." Dave said.
POV Dave
Why would my family be calling me here? What do they even want? And how do they know where I am?
"What? but u haven't spoken to your parents in ages." I heard Kerry say.
"I know. What did the voice sound like?" I asked.
"It was a male voice, abit deep." keisha instantly replied.
"My father. who did he say he wanted again?"
"Daniel Roothkins Smith."
"Daniel? that's my brothers name. Why would he ask for him?"
"I don't know but he said your surname so i automatically tought you."
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Permalink Reply by Aisling on -
*how about half-brother? (sorry I haven't been on in a while) that would explain how he was full werewolf. Also I think that I like the idea of Sammy going to the bad side (but not really). I think that it'd be kinda cool if she didn't tell anyone about it and just suddenly go to Anthony and tell him that they were planning on getting Simon to be a spy. Anthony isn't sure whether to believe her or not - then Simon comes along and Anthony sees it as a test for her I'll write it now and you guys can decide whetehr you like it or not...*
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Permalink Reply by Mel on
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**Half-brother is good. but sammy would betray her brother and she doesnt seem that type **
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Permalink Reply by Aisling on
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*She's not actually betraying Simon, she's just pretending to, she knows that the others aren't very good at acting so they'd have to actually think that she had gone to the "dark" side to act like they should/would. FYI I have finished writing what i was writing and will put it down now... but it kind of got away from me... lol... sorry... I really don't think it's that good, (I haven't read it through though) I've made Daniel a pure and utter psycopath... I hope that's okay...? Also I had an idea for when (if) it gets published... the bits that each of us wrote could be in a different font colour or actual font... just an idea...*
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Permalink Reply by Aisling on
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"I didn't know you had a brother?" Kerry seemed to ask me.
"Daniel... you know Daniel..." I tried to explain to her.
"Oh! Daniel! He's your brother? I though Aamanda was his mum?" She still seemed confused.
"Well... my half-brother." I decided that I should strat to explain more to everyone, it would also give me an excuse not to look at her. It still hurts. "He's younger than me and insanely jealous because I get to spend so much more time with our dad. It's just because my dad cheated on my mum but she took him back... it's not my fault really but you know..." I shrugged. "That's life. C'est la vie."
At that moment there was a rumbling and it was as if the entire house shook. I heard a snarling outside.
"Oh Keisha..." I heard my brother's voice, followed by a cruel laugh.
Chapter (???????????????):
POV Change (Keisha):
I froze as I heard my name.
"Is that..." I swallowed. "Is that him...?"
"'Fraid so." Dave replied. I looked towards him and saw the sorrow in his eyes.
"Why is he after me...?"
Dave opened his mouth to reply when the ground shook violently.
I feel to the floor, screaming slightly.
"Keish!" Matt ran towards me. "Are you okay?" He sounded urgent.
"Of course... the shake just surprised me that's all..."
I tried to explain, letting him help me up, hoping he didn't realise I was shaking.
"What shake?"
I looked at Dave.
"I felt it." He said, turning away from me to everyone else. "Didn't anyone else?"
"No..." Everyone replied.
"Oh, shit." I cussed, knowing that whatever this meant it could not be good...
"Oh this is bad... this is very, very bad..." Dave was muttering. He came over to me and took me by the shoulders. I was feeling very tired already so I didn't argue as he shook me. "Keisha listen to me! My brother can attack certain people using a special ability he inherited form his mother! He's attacking us two! Hell knows why, but he is! You HAVE to stay concious!"
At that moment the ground shook again and I slipped from Dave's grip, falling to my hands and knees and coughed up a little blood.
"Oh God... Keisha get ready for the worst battle of your life!"
POV Change (Matt):
And with that they disappeared. It wasn't even like in the movies, no glow of any colour... just there one second, gone the next.
"Where is she? What happened? Is she alright?" I went around, frantically.
"Matt! Calm down! Dave'll keep her safe!" Kyle yelled at me.
"How do you know that? She could be dying for all we know!" I yelled at him.
"MATT! She is fine! I still have my twin connection with her!" He yelled back at me.
I stood there, panting from the sudden outburst and emotions for a while, until I caught my breath. "I'm sorry..."
"That's alright." He smiled at me. "I understand." I saw him look up and smile. I turned around and saw that he was smiling at Aliah.
"Er... guys..." Kerry interupted.
I turned to her, trying not to dislike her.
"Where's Sammy?" She asked.
We all looked around and saw that she was gone.
POV Change (Sammy):
Good. That was quicker than I expected. I left Aliah's as soon as I could. The werewolf's attack was perfect, I wouldn't be surprised if he was part of Anthony's coven, apart from perhaps the fact that he's a werewolf and Anthony's not so keen on werewolves...
I flitted all the way to Anthony's coven cave, before slowly to a walk to enter.
"Oh, brother? I have news of--"
He flitted to behind me and almost scared me as he whispered in my ear. "Hello dearest sister... how nice of you to join me... I think not!"
POV Change (Dave):
When the room disappeared I knew what was happening instantly and I hated it. This wasn't the first time I had been taken here, inside Daniel's World, but it was the first time that I had someone else with me as well.
"Listen Keisha... we're inside my brother's own world that he created years ago... it can change at random intervals... the most important thing is that we stay alive... If we stay alive for six hours, six minutes and six seconds then we will survive this... It'll be hard but... hopefully I'll beable to help get us both out of here..." It was at that moment taht I realised Keisha wasn't responding to me. I turned around to see her lying on the floor. "Keish!"
POV Change (Simon):
"I'll go after her!" I declared.
"Are you sure?" Kerry was looking at me desperately.
"I have to." I kissed her on the forehead.
"I'll come with you!" Kerry smiled at me.
"No, Kerry..." I pulled her arms off of me. "I have to go alone... Now... I better get going... She'll already be ahead..."
"Where are you going to go?" Kyle asked me.
"I think I have an idea where she might have gone..."
"Where?" Aliah asked.
Anthony's coven's cage.
I left, not bothering to answer.
POV Change (Keisha):
When I opened my eyes, I was surprised at how refreshed I felt. I yawned and looked around.
"Huh?" I said when I realised what was going on.
All of the floor and... well that was all there WAS... was black but with squares marked out in dark blue.
"Dave?" I said as I realised he was there with me. "What's going on?"
"Keish. We're in my brother's world. It can change at random intervals. We have to stay alive for exactly six hours, six minutes and six seconds or he'll never let us go."
"How do we survive?"
"I don't know yet."
POV Change (Anthony):
I didn't understand why Sammy was there, but whatever the reason she seemed to be alone.
"Why are you here?" I almost growled in her ear.
"I wish to tell you of my 'friends' plans. In exchange for this information I wish to join your coven as was previously arranged." She sounded calm. I couldn't have that...
"You tried before and failed. Why bother again?" I snarled.
"I do apologise, brother. I was misled by charm and good looks. Now that Kerry is back with him he has no time for me." She turned her head slightly away from the way I was facing, fresh tears glistening on her cheeks.
"Hmmm... I will consider it. If the information is good and correct then it will be fine. However... if it turns out to be false..." I left the threat hanging in the air.
"The information is this brother..." She turned around to face me, taking a deep breath and trying to clear her tears. "They are planning on sending Simon back to your coven, they seem to think that you're dumb enough to let him back in... and use him as a spy... again they seem to think that you're dumb enough to not realise this."
"Hmm... what proof do you have?" I asked her.
"Well... none..." I saw her shoulders slump slightly in disappointment, already knowing where this was leading.
"Hello brother." I heard Simon's voice behind me.
POV Change (Keisha):
It was then that the whole area around us changed. Suddenly we were wearing cloaks and masks and we seemed to be superheros... we were fighting a man with a machine on his back... he was sucking up village people with it and using fire breath setting buildings on fire.
Suddenly he realised that we were there and looked up. His eyes were black and empty...
POV Change (Dave):
I'd recognise this place anywhere... it was from my own nightmares... as i small child I had watched a scary movie that went along the lines of something like this and had this recurring nightmare, I had made the mistake of telling Daniel about it and he had put it in his world as soon as he created it.
"Keisha... I've been here before... don't look in his eyes!" I yelled as I saw the fear in her eyes multiply.
"Keisha!" I screamed at her.
It was too late... she'd fallen into the Trap. I couldn't help her there...
POV Change (Aliah):
The tension in the room was unbearable... I looked around at everyone and decided to go make myself a drink.
"Anyone want a drink?" They all shook their heads moarnfully.
I sighed and went into the kitchen.
Just before my glass was full of water from the tap I heard Kyle scream.
I dropped the glass instantly, probably shattering it, I wasn't truly aware of anything but Kyle's scream. I ran as fast as I could into the lviing room where everyone was.
I saw Kyle on his knees, wheezing, Matt and Kerry round him.
"Kyle!" I yelled, running over to him, falling to my knees infront of him. "Kyle what is it?"
"Keish...a... she's..." He stopped breifly for a coughing fit. "hurt..." He coughed out some blood. I stared at the blood on the floor for a while... not truly understanding...
"Matt..." Kyle still managed to wheeze on, looking Matt in the eyes. "I... I think she's dying..." He fell into another coughing fit, rolling up into a ball, tears falling down his face.
POV Change (Anthony):
Perfect. Absolutely perfect.
I stood up straight and turned to face Simon.
"What do you want, brother?"
"I wish--"
"TRAITOR!" Sammy yelled at him. I had to physically hold her back as she ran, trying to attack him. "Let me go Anthony!!! He's betraying our family's honour! He's one of THEM!"
"Hush, dear sister." I whispered in her ear.
Reading Simon's emotion part of his brain, not being able to read any other part but the communications part, due to family honour, I could tell that Sammy had tears pouring down her face and her eyes looked wild with rage. Simon was scared of her.
I smirked slightly.
"I... I wish... to join your coven again..." Simon finally managed to look away from Sammy and at me.
"I TOLD YOU! TRAITOR!" Sammy continued to yell. "Let me at him True Brother! He is not one of us! He is a False Brother! A traitor! A dishonourment! He's DEAD!" She somehow managed to get out of my grip and ran at Simon, screaming.
POV Change (Keisha):
I fell into those eyes, like a bottomless pit. I felt myself spiralling downwards, I fell and fell and fell for what felt like eternity.
I heard Dave's voice far away but couldn't make out what he was saying.
"Keishaaaaa...." I think I heard someone say, but I couldn't be certain.
Suddenly I was tied to a table and a man was standing over me.
"He he he... this was so easy... as you will be... let's make it so that Dave can watch, shall we?" He laughed again.
"Who are you? What are you talking about?" I yelled, pounding my fists, trying to get out of my rope bonds.
He flicked a button on a remote.
"I am Daniel. I am sure you have heard of me."
POV Change (Dave):
I watched Keisha desperately, looking all over her body to check for signs of her suceeding or failing... I knew that I'd probably be safe while she was out... but that wasn't really much consolation at all.
Suddenly some robots appeared, flying, out of nowhere. They made towards me. I tried to fight them off but there were too many... they turned my face violently towards Keisha, making me look her in the eyes and suddenly I could see what was happenig to her. The robots held me still, hurting me, but I didn't care. For what I could see was so horrible, so terrible, so disgusting that I didn't care..
POV Change (Simon):
I was confused as to what was going on... was Sammy really feeling like this? How could she not be...
She started hitting me incredibly violently, I tried to fight her off but foudn it impossible. I couldn't defend myself very easily either...
"Sammy!" I yelled just before she punched me in the face, causing my nose to bleed.
"Sammy!!" I heard Anthony yell.
POV Change (Anthony):
I watched Sammy beat Simon up, not truly wanting to stop her, but also not truly wanting to let her continue.
"Sammy!!" I finally yelled, annoyed at it going this far. She paid me no attention.
"Sammy!!!" I yelled louder. Still nothing.
I rolled up my sleeves, sighing. I'd have to get my hands dirty. Then I saw that Sammy was using her vampiric speed to attack Simon, he was helpless. She was going to kill him!
POV Change (Keisha):
"Daniel? Aren't you Dave's brother?" I asked, trying to bide time.
"Yes. Your precious Dave." He said precious as if it was a bad thing, an insult.
"MY Dave?" I was puzzled. "You think I'm going out with him?"
"I KNOW it... anyway... enough of this talk... let's get down to the exciting stuff..." He moved closer to me, smirking and looking truly evil.
"What are you going to do to me?" I gulped.
He got out a knife. "I'm going to cut off your maidenhead." He laughed at his own personal joke.
"What? My... what...?" I gulped as he got closer.
He climbed onto the table, his hands either side of my head, one with the knife still in it, his knees either side of my hips.
"Pfft. Aren't you well educated enough? Shakespeare?" He clearly saw that I had no idea what he was going on about. "Your maidenhead..." He leaned down to whisper the next bit in my ear, creepily. "is your virginity, your innocence..."
"NO!" I screamed suddenly, surprising even myself.
He laughed. Cruelly.
POV Change (Anthony):
I tried to get Sammy off of Simon but it wasn't working, in this short outburst of rage she was physically stronger than me, so I decided to use words instead.
"Sammy! This is family dishonourment! Killing a kinsmen is bad luck, dishonourment and instant punishment! Sammy listen to me!"
Suddenly she stopped.
POV Change (Dave):
I watched the scene between my brother and Keisha with sickening hate of my brother and his sickening ways. His mother was careless in the pregnancy, trying to get my father's attention. She had drunk her cares away while he was growing up. These factors added to the reason why he became as warped as he is now...
He is obsessive. Shakespeare is one of his obsessions, but definantly not his greatest... his greatest, I would say, is definantly the combination of pain and pleasure, having grown up with signs of love being kicks and punches...
My brother laughed as he slashed Keisha's chest with his knife, already having made them completely naked with his World Magic.
She screamed out in agony and he licked up her blood, starting to enter her.
She struggled and he just laughed even more.
I watched in horror as he tortured her in so many different ways, forcing her to have sex with him so many times...
He used steel whips and knives, he licked up her blood and made her lick his dick, he even used the knife to penetrate her... that was by far the worst...
He tortured her for hours and hours... well over six hours, hell, well over eight hours... but that didn't count... it had to be real time... I forced my eyes away from his most recent devient sex act of torture and looked around the room for a clock... I found one and it was completely still.
He had finally managed to perfect pausing time. Shit. This meant we'd have to actually survive for longer than six hours....
POV Change (Anthony):
Finally! I breathed a breath of relief.
"You kill him then brother. Or if you do not mind, I would LOVE to finish him off myself..." She actually scared me with her insanity.
"No Sammy! This cannot happen! You have prooved yourself! Now away from here Simon!" With a wave of my hand I made him regain conciousness.
He immediatly stood up, petrified and legged it.
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