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Permalink Reply by Mel on October 1, 2009 at 3:29pm

POV Kyle

They where talking about what Reena wants but there was only one thing she obviously wanted; to come back to life. I knew where Reena was, she was leaning against the wall looking disgusted at all of us. I didn’t know why Matt and I were the only ones that could see her! I hadn’t told the others about being able to see her. Reena looked at me and I think she realized I was able to see her.
“What are you looking at?” She snarled.
“I’m not looking at.” Matt said.
She gave a small laugh.
“I wasn’t talking about you!”

POV Matt

Who was Reena talking about? I looked at everyone and they where looking back at me intently except… Kyle. Could Kyle see her?
“You better believe it!” Reena said.
“What? You can read my thoughts now?”
“Not just yours, all of theres.”
“Oh really?” I said sarcastically.
“Yeah, that girl over there is thinking about, in a good way. But she’s also angry with Kerry.”
“I could have guessed that.”
“Oh? So you know that Kyle can see me too?”
I looked back at Kyle. Why wasn’t he saying anything?
“Kyle, you can see her too!”
He looked up at me and everyone stared at him.
“Yeah, I guess.”

POV Keisha

Why didn’t Kyle say anything? He just let Matt seem crazy on his own! There was nothing left to say at this meeting, so I got up and began to leave.
“Where are you going Keisha?” Matt asked.
“For a walk, there’s nothing left to this meeting.”
I went outside and began to walk towards the woods.
“Wait up Keisha.”
I turned round and there was Matt running up to me. I stopped walking and waited for him to catch up.
“Thanks for coming with me.”
“No problem, besides I didn’t feel like staying there.”
“Yeah me too. Especially with Kerry!”
“I can’t believe they just let Simon and her stay with us! They’re evil!”

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Permalink Reply by Mel on October 3, 2009 at 4:40pm

“Yeah I know. Er.. I really like it that you came with me but I really want to be left alone right now.”
“Oh it’s okay. I’ll catch up with you later.”

POV Kerry.

There was a lot of commotion in the living room, they all wanted to find out how long Kyle knew he could see Reena? Why he didn’t tell them? Blah Blah Blah. It was so not interesting, I looked at Simon and he looked as bored as me. We still hadn’t talked about what happened in the battle scene or about staying with the good guys. I desperately wanted to talk to him but he was focused on his sister, Sammy. So I decided to slip away out of the house. I started walking and soon after I saw Keisha heading in the direction of the woods. Was she crazy? Those woods were dangerous. I decided to walk behind her but making sure she didn’t notice. She was walking into really deep woods. I didn’t stop her, just followed. I could sense danger close by. Right then out of nowhere a werewolf jumps out in front of Keisha. God, that girl is danger zone! I ran and pulled Keisha back. I used my angelic powers to make him not attack.

POV Keisha

What was happening? I saw a werewolf jump in front of me and the next I felt a hand grabbing me and dragging me away. I slapped the hand away and saw who the person who had just saved my life. Kerry. What is she doing here anyway?
“What are you doing here?” I snap at her.
“Saving your life apparently.”
“I could have done that on my own.”
“Yeah whatever.”
“Can’t you just leave me alone?”
“No, look I know you hate me but we should make friends now that we’re going to be on the same team.”
“I will never make friends with you again.”
“Why not?”
“Because you’re a stinking bitch!”
“Look sorry I tried to kill you.”
“You should be.”
“It’s not like I succeeded right?”
“Wrong! Look I don’t care if we’re on the same team.”
“I do.”
“Let’s get one thing clear we will NEVER make friends. I’ll just stay away from you and you do the same to me.”
Without hearing what she wanted to say I ran and left her were she was.

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Permalink Reply by annixandra lightwing on October 4, 2009 at 7:29am

*looking really good just got back on the site and read this one from the last time i read it looks really good and some good twists i like it*

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Permalink Reply by Mel on October 4, 2009 at 12:22pm

**Hey, thanks but no one is writing!!! =( and i'm writing alot from it ...**

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Permalink Reply by Mel on October 4, 2009 at 2:16pm

POV Simon

I hadn’t noticed that Kerry was gone. She probably went for a walk so I decided to go join her. When I went outside I saw Keisha walking towards the house, looking angry. I moved out of her way and continued walking, I could see Kerry standing still looking at Keisha’s back. I ran up to her and she smiled at me.
“Hey, what are you doing out here?” I asked.
“I just wanted to get out of that house, and talk to Keisha.”

POV Kerry

I was glad Simon came to find me; I really wanted to talk to him about everything that had happened to us.
“How did things go?” He asked me.
“Bad, she isn’t going to forgive me that’s for sure.”
I looked at Simon, and he was looking at me with deep emotion.
“We have a lot to talk about.” I said after a while. I rested against a tree and sat down and Simon sat opposite me.
“I know, where do you want to start?”
“Reena. Her death is a great deal, especially to Anthony.”
“I know but it shouldn’t be a problem to us. We left that coven and I don’t want to go back.”
“I know, me neither but why is Reena still haunting us?”
“I don’t know, and I can’t understand it. Why did you decide to come join these guys again?”
“I don’t know but I wanted to do what you did.”
“Why?”
“Because I know you keep me safe.”

POV Simon

How could she think that when she knows she “slept” with Anthony? Or did she realize it wasn’t him she slept with? I decided to tell her the truth; there wasn’t Anthony to stop me anymore.
“Kerry, the truth is…” I began but I couldn’t continue since the next thing I knew Kerry was kissing me. It was a sweet tenderies kiss.

POV Kerry

The moment I kissed him, I knew it was him that I slept with not Anthony.
“I know it was you.” I told Simon when we pulled apart.

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Permalink Reply by annixandra lightwing on October 7, 2009 at 3:28pm

***ok im going to write some in side *s because i want somebody to alter what i write to make it work better but kind of keep it the same because i totally suck at writing but the only way i can get what i have in my head is writing it like i would in a story but its no good the way i write it at least in my opinion so alter it and re post it to add it to the story***

* "Or at least i thought it was you but when i woke up Anthony was there and i thought i was him but i kissed him and it didn't seem right like the first time" i tried to explain but looked at the ground embarrassed that i hadn't realized that it was him that cared not Anthony. As i finished saying it he put his right hand under my chin and lifted my head so i was looking at him not the ground.

"I should have told you that it was me not him when i found you kissing him so its not all your fault that you didn't know but hes my brother and i did what he told me to instead of what i wanted to or even what i should have. how could u just tell from a kiss which one of us it was though?"he said looking in to my eyes

"i could tell because your lips are softer, because the way you kiss has passion and love his doesn't its like its something he had to do not something he wanted to" i said and smiled not an evil smile as i had been for a while now but a truly happy smile and he smiled back and kissed me and it was a sweet explosion just like the first time he kissed me it was a kiss of love ,full of passion and caring it was absolute bliss but it ended way to quick i wanted it to last for ever but he pulled back

"Kerry i know u know it was me now but before you kissed me and knew it was me you said i keep you safe how did you know i keep you safe even though you weren't sure it was me that you slept with?" it was such a simple question he was asking but after that kiss i wasn't sure i could speak yet so i just looked at him.he apparently took that as me not understanding the question and he sighed "you said because you know i keep you safe how did you know before you kissed me and realized it was me that you slept with and kissed not Anthony?" i knew i had to answer him or he would keep asking making the question simpler and simpler for me to understand i sighed "because you were always there right next to me even when Anthony wasn't the only time you weren't was when Anthony ordered you to do something and you did what he asked with what seemed like forced effort to leave my side and when you weren't there i didn't feel safe even though Anthony was with me when you weren't there it didn't feel right or safe and the sparkle in your eyes any time i came to find you for something Anthony wanted... now that i think about it you probably thought i had figured it out that it was you not him that kissed me every time i came to find you" i said with a slight sigh it was kind of obvious why i thought that y didn't he see it him self.

POV Simon

she was right, i was always right next to her from the time Anthony made me stay silent about it not being him that slept with her and brought her into the coven and our home well its was kind of our home while were here but not any more but i was always there except when i was forced away from her by Anthony.She noticed i was always there which is good i wonder why she noticed did she want to be with me not him even if it was him who slept with her and just didn't say any thing because she didn't want to get kicked out of the coven or have me tell her i don't like her like that? i should ask her. "Kerry why did you notice i was always there? and why didn't you ask me if you thought it was me not him that slept with you? were you worried about me saying no it wasn't me, or me telling him or something like that?" it all came out in a rush and i waited while she looked at me for a minute and then finally answered "i just always noticed you were there always right there as if waiting for me to turn to you and tell you i knew. i originally thought it was you but Anthony was there when i woke up but even then i wondered why it didn't feel right when i kissed him and wondered if it was really you but then you stopped seeming to care like it was just an order that Anthony gave you to be near me and when Anthony told you to go do something it seemed forced because you didn't want to disobey one thing he said to do another so i just assumed that it couldn't be you and it had to be him that you were just doing what you were told to do and be next to me" she said this with sadness in her eyes and looked back at the ground "Kerry it was never an order to be near you i was near you because i wanted to be not because i was ordered to be and it was forced to leave your side because i didn't want Anthony hurting you while i was gone and i never stopped caring i just...i just couldn't stand continually showing you just the slightest bit that i cared which was already going agents what Anthony had told me to do and u not noticing i figured as long as u were ok then i could be happy with that i didn't want to go agents Anthony" all i could do was sigh for a second after saying this "Kerry i..." before i could finish my sentience Sammy came running up of cores it would be my lil sister to butt in and ruin this perfect moment with Kerry getting every thing out in the open "hey there you guys are we were looking for u and Keisha had said she ran into Kerry out here and i knew if Kerry was out here u couldn't be far away" she said the last part looking at me "ya were out here talking about every thing since we haven't gotten a chance till now"

POV Sammy

oh i hope i caught them between topics of what they were talking about i don't want to have ruined any thing i hope he told her the truth "i hope I'm not interrupting then but we kind of kneed your guys' help inside Reena is driving them crazy trying to tell us something and being really rude and were not getting it were hoping you might will u come in and help us? please?" i looked at them for a moment before they looked at each other and sighed and stood up hand in hand. i guess he told her the truth i hope he told her he loves her before i interrupted if he did hell start not being as evil. taking them standing as a yes they will help i turned to head back to the house and heard there footsteps fallowing behind me i heard them stop for a second and heard Simon say "i love you that was what i was going to say when Sammy came running" and give her a quick and then they both started walking again i don't thing they realized or cared that i could hear what was said but i ws happy Kerry knew Simon loved her*

*** ok so now that that is out of my head somebody can fix it up so it works better with the rest of the book and post it ***

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Permalink Reply by Lillith Rose Amaranthus ♥ on October 24, 2009 at 5:45am

Is anyone going to continue???

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Permalink Reply by Mel on October 24, 2009 at 9:50am

**I would but i dont know how... the piece annixandra wrote is good. why dont u try writing?**

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Permalink Reply by Banana Babe XD on October 24, 2009 at 11:07am

*im a bit busy but ill try in abit*

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Permalink Reply by Aisling on October 29, 2009 at 1:53pm

*I've been ill, so... I mean it took me 5 days to even THINK about writing and looking at this... (and if you know me at all you KNOW that that means bad times) I reckon that we could just keep what annixandra wrote in its entirty (for lack of a better word), after all there are a few grammar and spelling mistakes, but there are in all of ours, I believe, so I'll have to edit them all when putting ti together. You see?*

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Permalink Reply by Banana Babe XD on October 29, 2009 at 3:41pm

*yh i agree we could just do that*

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Permalink Reply by annixandra lightwing on October 31, 2009 at 6:45am

* that works for me i guess if u guys think its good enough to be left the way it is :) i think what u guys write is way better than what i wrote but ok. so is any body going to write more?*

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