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Comment by Lilith of the Howling Wolves on November 16, 2009 at 2:11am

...this is probs one of my more depressing poems...most of them are...all of them are true...this is no exeption...

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The tears roll down her cheeks,
That girl in front of me.
She looks at me,
A tear falls.
I watch it drop,
Small, perfect, round.
A glint of silver,
Catches my eye.
A small blade,
In her shaking hand.
The razor,
Lifts to her arm.
The hand stops shaking,
The girl watches.
Skin sliced,
Blood runs,
A flowing red stream.
The tears stop rolling,
The girl in front of me,
She looks at me,
A perfect smile.
I smile back and turn,
Away from the mirror.

Comment by jackie krohn on November 16, 2009 at 2:00am

My heart

I gave you my heart to keep
You promised you would keep it safe
You lied
You ripped it and threw it out
My tears shed as you did this
I couldn’t speak
I ran
I ran as fast as I could
Climbed the stairs and slammed the door
I refused to let you see me cry
I wept until my eyes dried up
Then I tied a noose
I fitted it around my neck
Kicked the chair from underneath and hung
It was over in minutes
The sadness turned into death
I was free at long last.

Comment by Alma on November 15, 2009 at 11:09pm

have any of you been in love, so bad that you wanted to hold that person to you all the time?
has that ever got out of hand and you become clingy?
did you see how they felt and tried to hold yourself back?
did they start to fall away?
did you feel so stupid and helpless for not knowing what to do?
do wish for things to go back to the beginnign when thigs were happy?
did you start to hurt?
did you question if they still love you back?
do you wonder why they dont say hello?
do you have to be the one to say goodbye?
do you find your self close to tears at the end of every day?
do you wish you knew what they wanted you to do?

i just want to know how he feels and what he want me to do!

Comment by banana (heart broken) on November 15, 2009 at 10:49pm

ok princess of shadows
ok Aelita Lyajinzy Lyoko i was jw bc mabey we could help you with the end

Comment by Princess of Shadows on November 15, 2009 at 7:49pm

Hey people. Please check out my story and tell me what u think about it. Its on the vampires,freaks and that discussion thx.

Comment by Alice Green on November 15, 2009 at 7:46pm

I'm a singer too. I just can never think of anything to write.

Comment by Aelita Lyajinzy Lyoko on November 15, 2009 at 1:00pm

um well I don't wanna tell you yet. maybe later when I figure out if I stick with it

Comment by banana (heart broken) on November 15, 2009 at 5:59am

wat do you have so far?

Comment by Aelita Lyajinzy Lyoko on November 15, 2009 at 4:24am

I'm working on a song right now. the problem is finishing it

Comment by banana (heart broken) on November 15, 2009 at 4:06am

i loved you first you saw me last now my heart is a thing of the past

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