Writer Vampires

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Comment by renegade heart on July 17, 2009 at 11:17am

Please close the door
Create the wall all around her
Keep her pain between four walls
Lock that evil far from worlds eyes

She loves you
But can not show all that emotions so strong
Afraid that she’ll be destroyed
She just didn’t used to be loved

She adores you
But can not show all that positive things buried inside
Just hate who isn’t real she realizes
Every time you try to smile

Please run away spare yourself from pain
Save your soul from this bitter taste
From her you’ll never hear
Words polite and without sorrow

Whenever smiles,she forgets her world for a while
But salty tears are remainder where is her place every time
She’s able to love,but whenever she tries
She feel wrong inside,so she ruins everything around

Comment by Ina Divine on July 17, 2009 at 10:36am

banana what happens next , it extrime good ,

Comment by Ina Divine on July 17, 2009 at 10:32am

M. Moon Forbidden Thoughts is so cool , i love it

Comment by Alice Green on July 17, 2009 at 6:06am

I did. Thats cool. What happens next?

Comment by banana (heart broken) on July 17, 2009 at 5:32am

hey plz read my disscusion thingy....the other night i just stood up and camt to the comp and startd writing it. idk y but o well
plz tell me wat u think of it

btw....if u look at my other disscusion passion .... it will soon go wit it......i now have a plan and i dont have writers block any more :D

Comment by Holly Blu3 on July 17, 2009 at 5:04am

I hope I do too!

Comment by Michael T. Moon on July 16, 2009 at 1:52pm

A little poem that I experimented with

Forbidden Thoughts

Pink foil shimmers in the new light
Smiles stare up at me
Black stars with fairy eyes
Nestled in the fuchsia sky
Brown hair shines under fading lights
Drifting down across the back
Revealing warm forbidden flesh
Words scrawled on the page
Meanings for the writer
Ignored my the pen
Hand tremble at the thought
Mind drifts away
Heart grows with lust
Blue chair sits alone
Eyes drift over luscious curves
Wanting of that which you should not have
Needing you lie do yourself
Consuming passion
Compels you
Empty lost and gone
Dream a lifting fog
Leaves only a thought

Comment by Michael T. Moon on July 16, 2009 at 1:51pm

I love dreams that inspire you to write they are the best some day I hope you find your Jonah some day

Comment by banana (heart broken) on July 16, 2009 at 3:36am

wow
tats soooo great holly

Comment by Killer Clown on July 16, 2009 at 12:55am

hey jaya where are u?? u should on the chat

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