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Comment by Michael T. Moon on July 7, 2009 at 12:29am

Thank you keep writing

Comment by £¥ϡϦΩΨϾ :]Vada Vendetta [: Ͽ۞ӜϠϞ on July 6, 2009 at 11:57pm

that was very nice. thank you for the complement. writing has been the most important thing in my life since the third grade. i'm currently working on a book now but i just i should share my favorite poem with you guys. i'm very happy that you guys like it. that means a lot to me.

Comment by Michael T. Moon on July 5, 2009 at 9:28pm

I like it Vanity when you write from the heart amazing things happen. Please continue to write there is a spark there

Comment by £¥ϡϦΩΨϾ :]Vada Vendetta [: Ͽ۞ӜϠϞ on July 5, 2009 at 3:52pm

thank you. :) i wrote that in math class. it was the first poem i wrote from the heart.

Comment by Rachel on July 5, 2009 at 6:39am

thats really good vanity

Comment by £¥ϡϦΩΨϾ :]Vada Vendetta [: Ͽ۞ӜϠϞ on July 5, 2009 at 12:11am

please comment on this poem.

The Untouchables:

When we glide towards you, you look away
trying to escape the fate brought upon you;

When we haunt your dreams, you shiver and hypervenilate
endlessly, cringing in pain

With a simple touch, we suck the life out of you.
With a simple glance we petrify your every move

When we glide towards you, you run away;
trying to escape the fat brought upon you

When you sleep, we poison your dreams
with the toxins of the world.

We are the Untouchables;
Condemned to life with which we reek

We are the Untouchables
Through trial and error we constantly weep.

We never breath.
We never sleep: condemned to a world of constant creep

We laugh at you petty mortals who think you can escape death.

We are the Untouchables.
We are the things you hide away:
The souls you lead astray
The reason for the constant pray.

We laugh at the stupid things you say;
the sounds you hypervenilate

We are the Untouchables, her to seal your fate.


So what do you think?

Comment by renegade heart on July 4, 2009 at 11:03am

Standing in your eyes,my broken world of glass
One you'll never know
And because of that this song is sorrow

Passing me by one or two lifes
Setting me free,but what about my broken poetry?
Still broken in your arms my world of glass

Don't save tears for my funeral
Don't save them,cause i will live eternal
Even though I'm exiled from paradise,just my wings can not fly

My last hope turned to dust
All around shadows of something lost
Stay with fallen angel and hate my endless song

Temple of lies my home is now
Once I had heaven,but for moment I turned it to hell
It 's so long,future of wrong

Comment by Angeles FideLESS on July 4, 2009 at 8:46am

I've been struggling w/ writer's block for two years. My story has changed so many times it no longer resembles what it was during 7th grade...now I'm a Junior in high school!!!
But I'll do my best to find the words again. After all, it's like I always say:

"If everything we fought for in life was easy, would they be worth fighting for?"

Comment by i had an insomnia on July 4, 2009 at 7:44am

niceeee place for me to write everything.......

Comment by magdalene beau pre on July 4, 2009 at 3:21am

I'm thinking about writing a book :), The name is actually inspired by MCR song, Famous last words, instead named, my sacred last words :)

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