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Comment by Blue_Rose on November 12, 2009 at 9:20pm

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Comment by Princess of Shadows on November 12, 2009 at 8:27pm

In this feast I do partake,
For it is the means to life,
No matter how it may seem,
Nor how it may repulse me,
I must if I wish to live,


xx

Comment by Princess of Shadows on November 12, 2009 at 6:10pm

thanks alma and ive read some of your work and i loved them. im not one of those people to go around screaming my emotions and ive learnt the hard way of bottling them up so i found other ways to deal with them and i can relate to what other people wrtie and im glad you understand them. not all people will. to be our own is great btw xxx

Comment by Alma on November 11, 2009 at 11:03pm

~ be our own ~

our skin so soft, yet so hard.
our eyes so emotional, yet so powerfull.
our voice such a whisper, yet such a sound.
our ears so atuned, yet so deaf.
our sense of smell wonders, yet stays so near.
our toung so wet, yet so dry.
our personality will freeze, yet will change as we grow older.
our way of life the same everyday, yet different in so many ways.
ourselfs are good, yet we are bad.
our stong points are powerful, yet so weak when faced with our fears.
our happyness i contagious, yet so is our sorrow.
our love is so pleasurable, yet painful to include.
our lives so simmilar, yet so, so much different.

Comment by Alma on November 11, 2009 at 10:53pm

Princess of shadows i am loving your work, your poems are such, that i can relate to them more than i think some could understand.

Comment by Princess of Shadows on November 11, 2009 at 6:14pm

With sorrow deep in my heart,
I weep for what once was,
The guilt,
The remorse,
Tearing deeper and deeper,
It was all my fault,
I was to blame,
My cry of pain,
Echoes along the
Now empty halls,
And fell on empty ears,


another one of them
lol
x

Comment by Princess of Shadows on November 10, 2009 at 8:41pm

its great. truly great, i love it. dont worry about the length of them. my "tell me " is only 3 lines

Comment by Mastema on November 10, 2009 at 8:33pm

wow princess that stuff is awsome. here is one of mine (extremely short)

Day by day you look away,
from me and what we could be,
remorse in my heart for what i can not provide,
wishing you would love me.

Comment by Princess of Shadows on November 10, 2009 at 8:25pm

Tell me

You say that you love me,
You call me an angel,
Tell me I’m an angel and I’ll take it to the grave

Princess of Shadows

Darkness falls,
Slowly surrounding the last beams of daylight,
Inclosing it,
Consuming it,
Laid in the fading circle of the suns glow,
For the dying light I weep,
And for the expanding shadows,
I revel in this gloomy night,
Exposing my true nature,
As a Princess of Shadows.

Unable to show emotion,
Unable to breathe,
Surrounded by people
Clouded by judgement,
So obvious in their eyes,
No one understands,
And yet they still criticize,
Unappreciated, unloved,
And truly alone.

Stood out in the rain,
The sky as black
As my heart,
The tears streaming down my face,
And red as a midnight sun.
No matter how dark something,
Might seem,
There is always a little bit of brightness,
Hidden away,
Behind a mask,
Buried deep,
In the core of a broken shadow.

Comment by Princess of Shadows on November 10, 2009 at 8:24pm

these arent as good as my 'a dead world' poem but here they are:
A Broken Hearted Suicide.

I see you there,
Only across from me,
And yet a million miles away,
I remember a time when,
That space never existed,

The love so clear
When I used to gaze
into your eyes,
Now the only thing,
I see is a world,
full of pity,

I can’t bear this anymore,
So for the final time,
I run away,
To find a peaceful place,
I lay down solemnly,
And commit my,
Broken hearted suicide.

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