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Luka’s Point of view Blood Lust

That morning i woke Rina to get ready for school, I also had to go back home and change and pick Rina up making it look like to father i came from home. I left to go back home, i quietly go through my bedroom window so no one would realize i was home and suddenly my sister and brother, Danika and Tristan were in my room.
“your back!” said Danika “were you with Rina?” she asked i nodded my head.
“that must of made her happy” she said i wasnt sure if she was happy… Continue

Friday was the worst day ever at school, discretion day ( ugh) luckily for me josh did all the work while i told him what to do. After school Luka and i headed over to his place for the rest of the weekend, when we were driving it was pouring snow, and the roads were slippery, not for Luka of coarse he just kept speeding like a mad man. When we got home i decide to have a snow ball fight with my vampire, bad move, he creamed me majorly, i lay in the snow wet and cold as he stood over me and laug… Continue

Chapter fifth-teen expecting broken hearts

The week went by pretty quickly it was now March break , a whole week to do nothing, but i forgot to book the week off. The first two days of the break i had to work all day open to close. Today i only had a three hour shift, that morning Luka and i got into another stupid fight... about his “drinking issue” and him turning, why cant he realize that is the only way we can be together. I left the house feeing as if I wanted to kill someone. i had… Continue

I tossed and turned in my sleep the death of my mother replayed in my head like a movie for several weeks and at the end before I woke up I would see his eyes, the man who caused all of this, my suffering and torture, I was trapped in my own mind and no way to get out. I stared up in his glowing eyes that looked at me with blood lust.
“What do you want with me?” nobody answered “WHO THE HELL ARE YOU?”
“Your worst nightmare” then he lunched at me.,
I shot up out of bed,
“WHAT THE HELL!!” I scream… Continue

3 weeks later after graduation

I lay on my bed hugging my pillow I heard my door creek open I looked back and saw my dad coming over to me, he sat on my bed rubbing my back, tears started to fall from my eyes and onto my pillow.
“Hey honey” my dad whispers softly
“Hi” I whisper, my thought was dry I coughed.
“You okay” I turn and face him he shook his head, must of look like crap I wiped my tears from my face. My dad opened his arms, I threw myself at him and I berried my face in his chest and… Continue