If I can't hear your heart beat, your to far away

Chapter 1
the little girl stood dazed in the middle of the room looking at her reflection in the shatterd mirror that surrounded her. hearing "thump" the little girl jumped looking around frantically she heard it again running out of the house she ran until she hit the ground under a willow tree breathing heavily.
she watched as a car stopped and a women no more than twenty got out asking. "Are you?" the little girl looked up than every thing went black and she fell unconsous to the ground. "Is she ok honey?" the women husban asked standing beside her. "I think she passed out poor girl i wonder waht she's doing way out here?"