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I just got a little inspiration... Hope you like it!
I felt chills as his cold skin connected with mine. His lips of ice brushed across my skin, and I felt him flinch when he smelled the life in me. I could feel his razor sharp fangs barely touching my neck, he was restraining with everything he had, I just knew. His fingers traced the lines on my chest, and the icy feel made me twitch a little. He breathed across my shoulder, and I immediately relaxed. I was terrified, but I couldn't move an inch. He had me in his power, and I wasn't going anywhere.
He spoke to me in such a low voice; and yet I understood exactly what he said.
"You're mine."
Every muscle in my body told me to get out of there, but my soul was now connected to his, and he wasn't letting me go anywhere. I wanted him, and he wanted my life. I never imagined this is how it would end...
It was like a lamb to the slaughter...
Ok guys, this is my first work of fiction, and I just wrote this with absolutely no editing. So, I want opinions. Did you like it? How can I improve? Comments, comments...
Thanks, Bowen
He spoke to me in such a low voice; and yet I understood exactly what he said.
"You're mine."
Every muscle in my body told me to get out of there, but my soul was now connected to his, and he wasn't letting me go anywhere. I wanted him, and he wanted my life. I never imagined this is how it would end...
It was like a lamb to the slaughter...
Ok guys, this is my first work of fiction, and I just wrote this with absolutely no editing. So, I want opinions. Did you like it? How can I improve? Comments, comments...
Thanks, Bowen
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Comment by wolfie~Ares son~ on July 22, 2009 at 5:20pm - when r u getting back online and i love the story!
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Comment by wolfie~Ares son~ on July 22, 2009 at 12:40pm
- .....! that was awesome bowen plz right more if you do i cant wait oh by the way check out my site
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Comment by MAX on July 20, 2009 at 3:01pm - this is awesome. i couldnt wait to see wat was next. love it! if you dont keep writing, that'll be a shame. (:
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Comment by Alma on July 19, 2009 at 9:31am - omg i loved it, so intense, it griped me, soo.... omg i cant find the word, its beyond words, loved it
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